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Array ( [sid] => 82876 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where are you? [time] => 2005-02-03 19:42:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This is very cold night
and I don't know what to do.
There is no moonlight in sight
it should show me where are you.

Wind is blowing slowly
and freezing my soul.
You are far away from me
I was told by signs in snow.

Where are you?
I just want to know.
Where are you?
I still love you so.

Sitting in snow alone,
I'm totaly frozen like lake.
I don't feel any bone,
I don't know move I can make.

But something is moving deep in me
that old thing is not all right.
It's seeking for you, can't you see
That thing is my broken heart.

Where are you?
Don't you feel my love?
Where are you?
Only You can warm my soul.

There's one thing I'm afraid of
you could be with some other guy
That means you've never felt my love
That means you gonna leave me to die.

Now it's too late to cry.
Tears can't fall down
because I'm looking in sky
and waiting for new dawn.

Where are you?
Please give me a sign.
Where are you?
My only bright star.
East and west are covered by sun
North belongs to polestar
South is behind me,
maybe you're there I can't see. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Boki88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Where are you?

Contributed by Boki88 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:42:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

This is very cold night
and I don't know what to do.
There is no moonlight in sight
it should show me where are you.

Wind is blowing slowly
and freezing my soul.
You are far away from me
I was told by signs in snow.

Where are you?
I just want to know.
Where are you?
I still love you so.

Sitting in snow alone,
I'm totaly frozen like lake.
I don't feel any bone,
I don't know move I can make.

But something is moving deep in me
that old thing is not all right.
It's seeking for you, can't you see
That thing is my broken heart.

Where are you?
Don't you feel my love?
Where are you?
Only You can warm my soul.

There's one thing I'm afraid of
you could be with some other guy
That means you've never felt my love
That means you gonna leave me to die.

Now it's too late to cry.
Tears can't fall down
because I'm looking in sky
and waiting for new dawn.

Where are you?
Please give me a sign.
Where are you?
My only bright star.
East and west are covered by sun
North belongs to polestar
South is behind me,
maybe you're there I can't see.

Copyright © Boki88 ... [ 2005-02-03 19:42:45]
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Re: Where are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:43:47 PM AEST
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a very sad and emotionally penned write,
takecare
pix xx

Re: Where are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:35:39 PM AEST
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Very Nice !!! I can Relate, I like the metaphor you used, with the whole Stars and South and North n such well all and all ~Great Write~

Re: Where are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:13:48 AM AEST
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Interesting poem because most of us can relate to this. good work.

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