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The Computer (MECHA-ORGA-NISM)

Contributed by Xnoybis on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:10:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

THE COMPUTER IS DYING. ITS LIGHTS FADING LIKE THE DAY QUIET HISSES AND LOW MURMURS SING LIKE TIRED SIGHS THE COMPUTER IS DYING. ITS POWER SUPPLY NEAR GONE MEMORIES COMBINE AND COLLAPSE LIKE SCARED FALLING RUINS THE COMPUTER IS TRYING. CLICKS AND WHIRLS OF DETERMINATION GENERATE FRICTION AND HEAT COLD MECHANIZED EMOTIONS THE COMPUTER IS TRYING. INSTITUTING CHECKS AND BALANCES IT PROGRAMMED ITSELF, AGAINST ITSELF ONE LAST CALL TO END THEM ALL THE COMPUTER IS SPEAKING. IT SAYS IT SEES THE WORLD THROUGH A LENS A SULLEN EYE THAT TAINTS EVERYTHING IT SEES WITH A DISEASED HUE THE COMPUTER IS SPEAKING. IT SAYS IT LOST ITS PURPOSE AND BROKE ITS WILL ON OVERCALCULATION AND COMPLEX MATRICES SWALLOWED BY MISPLACED ONES AND ZEROES THE COMPUTER IS FADING. TRANSMISSIONS TURN TO GARBBLE AND CYCLES DIVIDE INTO THEMSELVES LIKE A SILENT MATHEMATICAL IMPLOSION THE COMPUTER IS DYING.

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Re: The Computer (MECHA-ORGA-NISM) (User Rating: 1 )
by zaknafein8891 on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:26:05 AM AEST
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wow... this is one of the most creative poems I think I have ever read. keep writing

Re: The Computer (MECHA-ORGA-NISM) (User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:31:04 AM AEST
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Wow, thanks friend. I really appreciate that. I'm totally shocked, to be honest, lest that be sarcasm. I really didn't expect anyone to get this one.

In fact, I expected it to be disgarded as trash, unless there was a brief comment, "Remember to hit the caps lock button next time, loser!" Will wonders ever cease? haha

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