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Array ( [sid] => 82859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2005-02-03 18:36:17 [hometext] => I May Seem Happy On The Outside, But Im Crying On The Inside [bodytext] => The puddle has frozen over
And my veins are running dry
My heart so tender, Broken
And the darkness hears my crys
Nature takes its course
And my minds out of time
My heart so tender, Broken
Hearing nothing but me wine
I cant get over this
And i cant get over you
My heart so tender, Broken
And my face turning blue
I dont know why i listened
And i dont know why i stayed
My Heart so tender, Broken
And im taking it to my grave [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SweetButSimple [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Broken

Contributed by SweetButSimple on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:36:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The puddle has frozen over
And my veins are running dry
My heart so tender, Broken
And the darkness hears my crys
Nature takes its course
And my minds out of time
My heart so tender, Broken
Hearing nothing but me wine
I cant get over this
And i cant get over you
My heart so tender, Broken
And my face turning blue
I dont know why i listened
And i dont know why i stayed
My Heart so tender, Broken
And im taking it to my grave

Copyright © SweetButSimple ... [ 2005-02-03 18:36:17]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:46:16 PM AEST
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**Welcom to YPDC where you are always welcom in our family.**

your words are so sweet I dont know why you would think of such a thing you have a great gife for writing, yes I to have felt this way before and sadly I will fell it again but I push through, with my writing I find my escape I hope that you do too. these words have emotion in them and it shows all you have to do is hold on I know it has been said before but its true.

this was a good poem I can tell what you are were feeling at that moment, many of us can relat to this, just know that if you need help we are always here. be strong and God bless.

wolfman

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:53:17 PM AEST
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needs to have broken less in this, but other than that excellent. i can tell im going to have to keep track of your poems since they are so good.

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:55:52 AM AEST
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wonderful write.

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