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Array ( [sid] => 82835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I still love her. [time] => 2005-02-03 17:07:44 [hometext] => was just day dreaming, I do miss her though. but it was for the best hope you enjoy it, please commint thanks [bodytext] => I love her still.

It was better to cry those broken tears
Then to have suffered through our years
Still now it is you I want to hold
But to do so would be brazen and bold
We left on good terms no tears or pain
But to say that now would be in vane

I loved you with my heart
A new life I did want to start
You we caring and so sweet
I did grovel at your feet
We had to go our separate ways
After that my heart was in a haze
The reason why I do not know
But the need to now does show

What you wanted I would have done
But to and end our time together did run
I am sad but not broken
For having you was a token
You will be forever in my memories and my heart
As this soul try my new start.

“Can I speak to Dr. Capelin?”
Yes you are, he replies
“I don’t need help anymore.”
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 24 [informant] => wolfman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

I still love her.

Contributed by wolfman on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I love her still.

It was better to cry those broken tears
Then to have suffered through our years
Still now it is you I want to hold
But to do so would be brazen and bold
We left on good terms no tears or pain
But to say that now would be in vane

I loved you with my heart
A new life I did want to start
You we caring and so sweet
I did grovel at your feet
We had to go our separate ways
After that my heart was in a haze
The reason why I do not know
But the need to now does show

What you wanted I would have done
But to and end our time together did run
I am sad but not broken
For having you was a token
You will be forever in my memories and my heart
As this soul try my new start.

“Can I speak to Dr. Capelin?”
Yes you are, he replies
“I don’t need help anymore.”

Copyright Â© wolfman ... [ 2005-02-03 17:07:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I still love her. (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:12:07 PM AEST
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that's very good.

Re: I still love her. (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:56:33 PM AEST
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i know how you feel, great job...

Curtis

Re: I still love her. (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:37:43 PM AEST
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I love the first two lines! I mean the rest was good but my sight was clouded by the glory of the first two lines.
I don't think you had to put the "I do miss her though" in the A. C., I kind of got the impression by reading the poem.
Seriously, Josh, well done.
Take care.
David

Gary.... Gary....

Re: I still love her. (User Rating: 1 )
by StarViolet on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 06:10:53 PM AEST
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Your poem is really good. it has more heart to it than most other poems here to me anyway. the funny thing is this poem is like my reality. so in away thats why i like it so much. hope to read another poem just as good as this one. talk to you later
Ashley

Re: I still love her. (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:02:03 PM AEST
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An excellent piece. I like the emotion it conveyed. But... I don't understand the ending. I've puzzled over it for some time now, but I just don't see it.

Ah well. I'll force you to explain it later.

Andrew

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