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Never would I lie or would I deceive,
Your heart as it has been hurt before,
Kicked about & lay on the floor.

The love I harbour for you deep inside,
Will forever grow & stand by your side,
But I have a cloud hanging over my head,
A cloud called depression that makes me feel dead.

Love is strong as is the bond between us,
I hope that you & I can come out of this dust,
I know it gets almost unbearable for you sometimes,
To your heart I commit the deadliest of crimes.

Never have I loved like this,
Never have I earned for another’s sweet kiss,
The way that I do for you & your caress,
You have before pulled me out of my mess.

We share everything may it be good or bad,
To have you in my life I am more than glad,
To hear your laughter & see you smile,
Brings happiness to me in a great big pile.

I don’t want depression to destroy what we share,
I want you to read this to know I do care,
Hold my hand I really need you right now,
I want rid of my troubles but I just don’t know how.

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I'm In Love

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:00:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I’m in love with you please believe,
Never would I lie or would I deceive,
Your heart as it has been hurt before,
Kicked about & lay on the floor.

The love I harbour for you deep inside,
Will forever grow & stand by your side,
But I have a cloud hanging over my head,
A cloud called depression that makes me feel dead.

Love is strong as is the bond between us,
I hope that you & I can come out of this dust,
I know it gets almost unbearable for you sometimes,
To your heart I commit the deadliest of crimes.

Never have I loved like this,
Never have I earned for another’s sweet kiss,
The way that I do for you & your caress,
You have before pulled me out of my mess.

We share everything may it be good or bad,
To have you in my life I am more than glad,
To hear your laughter & see you smile,
Brings happiness to me in a great big pile.

I don’t want depression to destroy what we share,
I want you to read this to know I do care,
Hold my hand I really need you right now,
I want rid of my troubles but I just don’t know how.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-03 16:00:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:31:08 PM AEST
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Aw, this was so sweet. I hope you get trough the fog sweetie. You opened up and that was very brave of you. This was from the heart. I enjoyed it. I hope you keep getting piles of happiness, lol. Nice!

Re: I'm In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:31:10 PM AEST
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Aw, this was so sweet. I hope you get trough the fog sweetie. You opened up and that was very brave of you. This was from the heart. I enjoyed it. I hope you keep getting piles of happiness, lol. Nice!

Re: I'm In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:31:11 PM AEST
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Aw, this was so sweet. I hope you get trough the fog sweetie. You opened up and that was very brave of you. This was from the heart. I enjoyed it. I hope you keep getting piles of happiness, lol. Nice!

Re: I'm In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:31:11 PM AEST
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Aw, this was so sweet. I hope you get trough the fog sweetie. You opened up and that was very brave of you. This was from the heart. I enjoyed it. I hope you keep getting piles of happiness, lol. Nice!

Re: I'm In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by noone on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:33:34 PM AEST
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Very nice. Your love is expressed strongly in this poem, it is really unique.I hope you get through your problems together!

Kirsty xx

Re: I'm In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:08:02 PM AEST
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beautiful poem it was good to read
something by you again and i am glad to hear
that you are doing well. A beautiful written
masterfully penned poem... and nothing more
needs to be said except that.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I'm In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:11:14 PM AEST
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another beautiful peice of writting pixe, the heart
felt plea of a child, hold on 2 love how ever u must
wish u well my friend . . .

Dorian Chambers

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