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Array ( [sid] => 82815 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She always hurts me [time] => 2005-02-03 14:13:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Everything she does hurts me so bad.
Sometimes I think she is actually glad.
She has got a cheek to moan about my tone,
when she loves to go away and leave me alone.

Why can’t she admit she is wrong?
If she keeps it up I wont be here for long.
I would love to leave and be alone,
instead of watching her sit on her throne.

Why does she act as if everything is normal,
and spend the whole day talking formal?
I wish I did not take it to heart,
but when she leaves she’s such a tart.

Doesn’t she care that I hate living with her so much?
I would even prefer to live in a hutch.
If she loved me she would care,
that when she leaves I always swear.

Why am I expected to forgive,
when I can barely stand to live?
I don’t understand how she can go,
When all I’ve got is my shadow.

Why doesn’t she just leave for good?
I don’t care if she went without food.
When I’m angry she just can’t see.
She just can’t help but hurt me.
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She always hurts me

Contributed by shadowed_soul on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Everything she does hurts me so bad.
Sometimes I think she is actually glad.
She has got a cheek to moan about my tone,
when she loves to go away and leave me alone.

Why can’t she admit she is wrong?
If she keeps it up I wont be here for long.
I would love to leave and be alone,
instead of watching her sit on her throne.

Why does she act as if everything is normal,
and spend the whole day talking formal?
I wish I did not take it to heart,
but when she leaves she’s such a tart.

Doesn’t she care that I hate living with her so much?
I would even prefer to live in a hutch.
If she loved me she would care,
that when she leaves I always swear.

Why am I expected to forgive,
when I can barely stand to live?
I don’t understand how she can go,
When all I’ve got is my shadow.

Why doesn’t she just leave for good?
I don’t care if she went without food.
When I’m angry she just can’t see.
She just can’t help but hurt me.

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Re: She always hurts me (User Rating: 1 )
by noone on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:35:41 PM AEST
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This is really good, you have clearly expressed your feelings throughout. I know who you are referring to and i agree with you. Keep your chin up, not long to go until uni! Parties everynight, what do you say?lol. I love this poem, really angsty, keep it up!

Kirsty x

Re: She always hurts me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:29:22 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: She always hurts me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:43:54 PM AEST
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nicely expressed...... I f she keeps leaving and trying to come back lock the door on her that will teach her.... just trying to give you a chuckle I know what this feels like and hopefully for your sake it works out in a good way
Michelle

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