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Once was good but has since turned bad,
I love you with all my heart,
Yet I feel like we are oceans apart.

I look over at you lay so still,
Has our love lost its power & will?
Please tell me that we will last,
That our love won’t fade into the past.

Love once coursed through our veins,
It was our true love that had hold of the reins,
Compassion once ran at a surprising pace,
It beat everything else in the true love race.

But now has all this changed?
Has all our love finally re-arranged?
Has it turned back to a moment in time?
Has it all gone back to when you were not mine?

Why won’t love stay in my arms?
It is because I unintentionally cause harm?
Or maybe it’s because I don’t deserve love,
Why won’t my raven turn into a dove?

I tried, oh my did I try,
I hoped & prayed things wouldn’t die,
But my poor heart has took a beating,
Heartache has won in its defeating.

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Everything We Had

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:31:15 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Babes everything that we had,
Once was good but has since turned bad,
I love you with all my heart,
Yet I feel like we are oceans apart.

I look over at you lay so still,
Has our love lost its power & will?
Please tell me that we will last,
That our love won’t fade into the past.

Love once coursed through our veins,
It was our true love that had hold of the reins,
Compassion once ran at a surprising pace,
It beat everything else in the true love race.

But now has all this changed?
Has all our love finally re-arranged?
Has it turned back to a moment in time?
Has it all gone back to when you were not mine?

Why won’t love stay in my arms?
It is because I unintentionally cause harm?
Or maybe it’s because I don’t deserve love,
Why won’t my raven turn into a dove?

I tried, oh my did I try,
I hoped & prayed things wouldn’t die,
But my poor heart has took a beating,
Heartache has won in its defeating.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-03 11:31:15]
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Re: Everything We Had (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:38:00 AM AEST
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Of course this is very good..The feel here is one of the best I have read in a bit..

Re: Everything We Had (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:59:48 AM AEST
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pixilator..I hope this is just a poem :-(

Re: Everything We Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:28:35 PM AEST
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Love either grows, turns into a lifetime of dedication, or dies. The real thing (I know I've said this before) will empty your bedpan when you're 83. That's not very romantic, but it's true.
Stitch

Re: Everything We Had (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:31:55 PM AEST
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i'm sorry 4 your pain pixie, but as your sadness

shows through in this poem, so does the beauty

that u portray in your word, u r a literary treasure

2 these pages, wish u well . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Everything We Had (User Rating: 1 )
by evilcherry312 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:35:35 PM AEST
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awww pixie....i currently know the pain you're going through, and it is very hard. but if your anything like me, then the words you write on a page will help soothe your aching heart. and the words you write are very powerful. *hug*

~ your evil cherry

Re: Everything We Had (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:24:26 PM AEST
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everyone deserves love esspecaly if they have had it. love is a tendor complicated think that can and does change unexpectidly which is what makes it so hard for some to kwwp but if you know that you love that poirson then it wil all work out things like tis happen for a reason its testing your comitment to eachother and will come again in time but if its ment to be that it will all work out.

I am sorry for your pain you are going through and just know that youy will be in my prayers, your significant other more then likly only wishes the best for you and will do almost any thing to make this easy on you, just talk about what you are feeling and see whaty comes of it. best of luck and God bless.

wolfman

Re: Everything We Had (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:02:30 PM AEST
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this hurt to read because you are my friend and i want for you happiness, im crying, and cant give a proper comment, you are such a sweetie, keep writing, hang in there:) hugs n' love nessa

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