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Was the hardest thing on me
My stomach wrenched with pain
As I laid there weakened by every cry I heard
I just wanted to make the pain go away
So I did the most horrible thing
I hurt myself with a piece of glass so sharp
It made me feel relief
But now I must be a bad little girl
No longer your good girl who never did anything wrong
I wanted your pain to end
So I made myself hurt instead
That's when I realized
It didn't help you
You were still hurting inside
I tried to listen in last night
As you cried to him and he walked out of the room
Telling you to stop
I feel so clueless and left out
Why don't you ever tell me what you two are fighting about
I doubt that you'll get married now
And you know that hurts me even more inside
Because the one thing I don't like
Is when you aren't happy
But your pain will heal
When he says he loves you and is sorry
But mine will stay because I will not know
If you are truly happy [comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 48 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I Hurt Myself Because Of Your Painful Tears

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:30:58 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Hearing you cry
Was the hardest thing on me
My stomach wrenched with pain
As I laid there weakened by every cry I heard
I just wanted to make the pain go away
So I did the most horrible thing
I hurt myself with a piece of glass so sharp
It made me feel relief
But now I must be a bad little girl
No longer your good girl who never did anything wrong
I wanted your pain to end
So I made myself hurt instead
That's when I realized
It didn't help you
You were still hurting inside
I tried to listen in last night
As you cried to him and he walked out of the room
Telling you to stop
I feel so clueless and left out
Why don't you ever tell me what you two are fighting about
I doubt that you'll get married now
And you know that hurts me even more inside
Because the one thing I don't like
Is when you aren't happy
But your pain will heal
When he says he loves you and is sorry
But mine will stay because I will not know
If you are truly happy

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-02-03 09:30:58]
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Re: I Hurt Myself Because Of Your Painful Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:02:27 AM AEST
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Aw AMy, this was so sad and upsetting. But you wrote your feelings and thoughts quite well. You seriously keep improving!

Re: I Hurt Myself Because Of Your Painful Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:33:29 AM AEST
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yes I agree with Rx you have vastly improved and your writing is getting better with each poem you submit, good work, very deep and sad *hugs*
pix xx

Re: I Hurt Myself Because Of Your Painful Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:52:35 PM AEST
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Oh Amy this such an upseting write, im so sorry and sad to hear of your mom's problem. But never and i mean never cut yourself ok. That's just wrong if you need to talk im always an PM away ok.

*HUGS YOU TONS*

Jane x

Re: I Hurt Myself Because Of Your Painful Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:50:17 PM AEST
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writing ur feelings on paper is good.
-huggles-

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