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Array ( [sid] => 82774 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Questioning Reality [time] => 2005-02-03 04:43:57 [hometext] => Started this poem 5 or 6 years ago, finished it the other day. I had some heavy things on my mind at the time I started it. [bodytext] => Passage through time
Riding on a dream
I'm not sure
Just what it all means

Looking in the window
Watching myself act
Afraid of what's seen
Carried on my back

Whispers I hear
Directions in the dark
Confused, all alone
Trying to play this part

Try to seperate reality
from this strange dream
People are never....really
What they seem.

They talk, talk, talk
Never hear the truth
Wouldn't know if it
slapped "em in the face

Standing Screwing
Watching Laughing
I'll take my rightful place.
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Questioning Reality

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:43:57 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Passage through time
Riding on a dream
I'm not sure
Just what it all means

Looking in the window
Watching myself act
Afraid of what's seen
Carried on my back

Whispers I hear
Directions in the dark
Confused, all alone
Trying to play this part

Try to seperate reality
from this strange dream
People are never....really
What they seem.

They talk, talk, talk
Never hear the truth
Wouldn't know if it
slapped "em in the face

Standing Screwing
Watching Laughing
I'll take my rightful place.

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2005-02-03 04:43:57]
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Re: Questioning Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:39:50 AM AEST
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Nice one!

Re: Questioning Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:46:07 PM AEST
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u have a way of summitting reallity very artisticaly,

i like reading your poems, u have a gentle way of

saying in your face, very stylish . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Questioning Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:28:52 PM AEST
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can we say screwing??? I didn't know we could say screwing..rotflmao..hey someone gave you a 2..you got upgraded..congrats!!!! LOL this was a great poem.. a 7 at least.. (if I voted..that's nonthenthe..)

Re: Questioning Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:46:19 PM AEST
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great style, expression and flow, laid out beautifully, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Questioning Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:16:01 PM AEST
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Very nice. I can relate to this kind of.

Scott

Re: Questioning Reality (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:47:29 PM AEST
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Good write. interesting concept.

Ginny

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