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Array ( [sid] => 82764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sorrow soaked tears [time] => 2005-02-03 01:33:11 [hometext] => strong emotions [bodytext] => i hear about the soft breeze in the cool night
but i don't see the hope everyone proclaims so bright..
i sit alone and wonder, am i as happy as im pretending
but as of now im wishing i was any ware makeing love without ending

this cold wind still blows even though i cannot feel
i seem so numb, my soul taken from me unable to heal
my heart was never broken but is perpetually without a home
it hurts me so much, and in all my love i have loved alone

i fear i will never breath again
and my search for peace has yet to find an end
A desperate wish is quietly made
i set myself bleeding,letting my sorrow soaked tears cascade

there is so much to be happy about, yet i cant fake a smile
i guess there is something wrong, but im stuck in my denial
im never good enough, and im never going to get any better
im ugly, useless, a waste of space drifting on sorrows zephyr

Nothing left for me to see
A failure is what I'll always be
With nothing left for me to live for
I lay dying, hopeless on the floor [comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 32 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Sorrow soaked tears

Contributed by socialmisfit on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:33:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



i hear about the soft breeze in the cool night
but i don't see the hope everyone proclaims so bright..
i sit alone and wonder, am i as happy as im pretending
but as of now im wishing i was any ware makeing love without ending

this cold wind still blows even though i cannot feel
i seem so numb, my soul taken from me unable to heal
my heart was never broken but is perpetually without a home
it hurts me so much, and in all my love i have loved alone

i fear i will never breath again
and my search for peace has yet to find an end
A desperate wish is quietly made
i set myself bleeding,letting my sorrow soaked tears cascade

there is so much to be happy about, yet i cant fake a smile
i guess there is something wrong, but im stuck in my denial
im never good enough, and im never going to get any better
im ugly, useless, a waste of space drifting on sorrows zephyr

Nothing left for me to see
A failure is what I'll always be
With nothing left for me to live for
I lay dying, hopeless on the floor




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Re: Sorrow soaked tears (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:16:22 AM AEST
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well i can certainly relate to this write. hang in there as your time will come.
I had given up on luv to but a dear friend was patient enuff to lead me in the right direction.
Hang in there and trust god to get u there.
i don't have anyone right now but I have many friends to help me get thru. If u need to pm me any time. I don't really have time for im but sooner or later I will get to u on pm.
Hugs, luv, prayer,
emy


Re: Sorrow soaked tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:26:29 AM AEST
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I can relate to that too.I felt like that a few years ago.And it takes time to heal.take care.
well done on the poem.


Re: Sorrow soaked tears (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:34:12 AM AEST
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Bravo on a creative write, i just loved each stanza.
You have writen this so well im re-reading it again and again.

Jane x


Re: Sorrow soaked tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:21:29 AM AEST
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heartfelt poem, i noticed you were on a different realm of thought your first two stanzas, then kinda changed mid-stream, almost like two poems... hugs n' love nessa

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