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A dark hazy night
I walk a broken bridge
Not a person in sight.

I sit on the edge
Of the roman built wall
I slip on the ice
And I felt myself fall.

I slammed on the ice
Then slowly fell through
Realizing there was
Nothing I could do.

So the water entrapped me
And the cold, it enhanced
I froze in that lake
My eyes entranced.

When they pulled me up
I was solid ice
My life was gone
People wondered the price.

My heart had been broken
The autopsy said
And a picture of you
I held in my hand.

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Icy Story

Contributed by Shattered_Angel on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It was like all the stories
A dark hazy night
I walk a broken bridge
Not a person in sight.

I sit on the edge
Of the roman built wall
I slip on the ice
And I felt myself fall.

I slammed on the ice
Then slowly fell through
Realizing there was
Nothing I could do.

So the water entrapped me
And the cold, it enhanced
I froze in that lake
My eyes entranced.

When they pulled me up
I was solid ice
My life was gone
People wondered the price.

My heart had been broken
The autopsy said
And a picture of you
I held in my hand.

Copyright © Shattered_Angel ... [ 2002-12-09 01:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Icy Story (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 01:16:49 AM AEST
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OUCH!!! This is so painfully sad...wow and the way you layed the words out so beautifully, i enjoyed reading this one...but i hope nobody ever does this over an internet romance coz tooo many people lie about their pictures...and i would hope you werent ending up holding the picture of someone that you dont even know...but this is a beautiful write....i love the way you ended the poem....thanks for sharing it..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Icy Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_Angel on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 08:32:32 AM AEST
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Thank you for your comment, i was begining to think no one would read. It was written for my ex fiance, who left me. Thank you again for your reply. Shattered Angel

Re: Icy Story (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:25:57 AM AEST
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I don't think I could say it any better then OreO. This was such a sad poem, you could feel the heartache.

Wonderfully expressed Shattered_Angel!

Yvonne

Re: Icy Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Ophelia on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 11:06:33 AM AEST
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This was an amazing poem! It hit with great intensity. Keep it up

Re: Icy Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_Angel on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 01:27:39 PM AEST
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I am glad you felt my heartache. my intentions in my poetry is for people to feel my story. i am pleased to know i accomplished this.

Re: Icy Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_Angel on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 01:28:46 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comment. hopefully it is a truthful statement. thanks.

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