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Array ( [sid] => 82745 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BECAUSE OF ME PART 1 [time] => 2005-02-02 23:17:13 [hometext] => plz reply...nicely! [bodytext] => It was just a stupid party
I begged you to let me go
I knew you wanted me to stay
But still you said “uh…you can go”

You told me all your rules
You told me not to drink
You told me not do drugs

I promised you I wouldn’t

I got into my car
I said I’ll be back later
Not knowing that I wouldn’t

I got to the party
I saw all my friends
Everyone was drinking

So I thought one wouldn’t hurt
But the “one”
Led to more

Soon enough I was drunk
I knew you would be mad at me
I didn’t want to come home

I decided to wait
Till I was a little more sober
I looked at the clock
3:00 it read

I got my keys
I new I was still drunk
But the ride home wasn’t long

I thought I could make it
But I was completely wrong

My head started to throb
My vision began to blur
But instead of stopping

I kept on going
Swerving side to side
I was beginning to get scared

But I told myself keep going
Your almost there
I didn’t see it coming

I hit the car straight on
Now I’m lying on the pavement
And my bodies going numb

I hear sirens coming closer
As I look around
I see the person that I hit

Lying lifeless on the ground
My car in completely total
But the others is worse


The ambulance is here now
But I know they are too late
No matter what

I’m gonna die tonight
Because I chose to drink

The person that I hit
Was a mother of three
Now her children are all motherless

All because of me

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BECAUSE OF ME PART 1

Contributed by morgana on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



It was just a stupid party
I begged you to let me go
I knew you wanted me to stay
But still you said “uh…you can go”

You told me all your rules
You told me not to drink
You told me not do drugs

I promised you I wouldn’t

I got into my car
I said I’ll be back later
Not knowing that I wouldn’t

I got to the party
I saw all my friends
Everyone was drinking

So I thought one wouldn’t hurt
But the “one”
Led to more

Soon enough I was drunk
I knew you would be mad at me
I didn’t want to come home

I decided to wait
Till I was a little more sober
I looked at the clock
3:00 it read

I got my keys
I new I was still drunk
But the ride home wasn’t long

I thought I could make it
But I was completely wrong

My head started to throb
My vision began to blur
But instead of stopping

I kept on going
Swerving side to side
I was beginning to get scared

But I told myself keep going
Your almost there
I didn’t see it coming

I hit the car straight on
Now I’m lying on the pavement
And my bodies going numb

I hear sirens coming closer
As I look around
I see the person that I hit

Lying lifeless on the ground
My car in completely total
But the others is worse


The ambulance is here now
But I know they are too late
No matter what

I’m gonna die tonight
Because I chose to drink

The person that I hit
Was a mother of three
Now her children are all motherless

All because of me





Copyright © morgana ... [ 2005-02-02 23:17:13]
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Re: BECAUSE OF ME PART 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:34:55 PM AEST
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aww i'm sorry,u must feel really bad and guilty,everything terrible always tends to happen to good ppl,this was a sad but a very good write,i give u 5 *s for ur talents and ur guts to come out and tell ppl what u did,keep up the great job

savedbydeath


Re: BECAUSE OF ME PART 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by morgana on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:52:54 PM AEST
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PART 2 is kalld
STUPID CHIOCE! chaeck it out!




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