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We flew into a The valley of the light.
To our delight we seen splendered upon some most marvelous things.
The Mercyfull Creator.
The Creator or our beings.

He sentenced us to eternity of Heaven.
A safe haven.
A somber place.
Pitched in we slept with no frights.

Centurys to hours.
Hours to many days.
Our creator banished us.

Into hell we flew.
That same merciless clouded Owl swept us away.
Deep dark with the most eerie sites.
We layed embowed in a painfull life.

I still sweat and I still sway.
When I hear Lucifer whisper from far away.
Im slipping in and out of conceit.

The angels revolted and tore heaven down.
Most of the heavenly angels died in utter agony.
While some of Lucifers minnions frowned.

The end of the end.
No wars have been fought.
But for your life, listen to what not.
Life is a riddle inside a broken mind.
Most of us are insane.
Were just afraid to admit it. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Mortis-Dark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

L.I.F.E

Contributed by Mortis-Dark on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:41:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

On the wings of a merciless clouded Owl.
We flew into a The valley of the light.
To our delight we seen splendered upon some most marvelous things.
The Mercyfull Creator.
The Creator or our beings.

He sentenced us to eternity of Heaven.
A safe haven.
A somber place.
Pitched in we slept with no frights.

Centurys to hours.
Hours to many days.
Our creator banished us.

Into hell we flew.
That same merciless clouded Owl swept us away.
Deep dark with the most eerie sites.
We layed embowed in a painfull life.

I still sweat and I still sway.
When I hear Lucifer whisper from far away.
Im slipping in and out of conceit.

The angels revolted and tore heaven down.
Most of the heavenly angels died in utter agony.
While some of Lucifers minnions frowned.

The end of the end.
No wars have been fought.
But for your life, listen to what not.
Life is a riddle inside a broken mind.
Most of us are insane.
Were just afraid to admit it.

Copyright Â© Mortis-Dark ... [ 2005-02-02 20:41:05]
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Re: L.I.F.E (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:52:34 PM AEST
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wonderful piece of art.

Re: L.I.F.E (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:57:38 PM AEST
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nice. you certainly put damnation, insanity, or what have you, into into pretty words.

Re: L.I.F.E (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:51:10 AM AEST
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Well, in some way I think that you are right... "Le Dieu Hôrloger" I do believe in that. Nice writing btw :)

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