Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 22:03:21 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 82680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors [time] => 2005-02-02 18:27:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Perception held in captive time
From falling clocks and clouds sublime
Where silhouettes entwined in thought
Lie hollow, shamed, alone, distraught

Reflections of ones painful years
Flowing out through mirrored tears
When shattered glass imbues your mind
A prism of the last confined

In visions of a broken truth
Where shadows crawl and cant feel Ruth
As mirrored tears reflect one plight
This paradox of sound and sight

From clouds sublime and falling clocks
Where minds escape the shadowed locks
A hollow shell, emotion dry
To only hope the end is nigh.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => forever_lonely [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors

Contributed by forever_lonely on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:27:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Perception held in captive time
From falling clocks and clouds sublime
Where silhouettes entwined in thought
Lie hollow, shamed, alone, distraught

Reflections of ones painful years
Flowing out through mirrored tears
When shattered glass imbues your mind
A prism of the last confined

In visions of a broken truth
Where shadows crawl and cant feel Ruth
As mirrored tears reflect one plight
This paradox of sound and sight

From clouds sublime and falling clocks
Where minds escape the shadowed locks
A hollow shell, emotion dry
To only hope the end is nigh.

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2005-02-02 18:27:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:30:02 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

May i be the first to comment.
Very good, very. Nicely done.
Glad I helped with the name =)
x X x

Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:45:34 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

beautiful luke, i have so missed your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:08:44 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Awesome write! Great flow.

Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:26:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

amazing write,

Reflections of ones painful years
Flowing out through mirrored tears
When shattered glass imbues your mind
A prism of the last confined

I like this alot, great write

Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:08:43 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

amazing images and your general use of words is mind blowing. the last stanza was my favourite but the whole poem made my arm hairs stand up!

Re: Through Tears of Hollow Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:34:43 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

You can't imagine how good it is to see your poetry on the home page my friend. Precision writing and such strong emotions made you then, and make you now one of the finest writes I have ever read..

It's good to see you Luke
Barkeep!! Larry

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com