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sometimes you have to loose it
all before you find your way,

stripped bare and bleeding in your soul,
then able to once again become whole,
far across the moonbeams
i know that's where you dwell,
within' the otherside of evermore
a breath away from hell,

you write across my heart
breathing life into my soul,
lifetime long, evanescent memory
as you live in me,
yet you will never fade!
at all before i find my way,

alas, once was something,
far more than today,
for alone i am nothing;
at best just a part,

to keep it all together;
you write across this heart,
for, love, life with you,
was a true work of art,

all before you found your way,
do remember i'm right behind,
for even knowing our souls are entwined

at times alone;
still i fly blind...

§* *§
*|*

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heart notes

Contributed by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:22:38 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

sometimes you have to loose it
all before you find your way,

stripped bare and bleeding in your soul,
then able to once again become whole,
far across the moonbeams
i know that's where you dwell,
within' the otherside of evermore
a breath away from hell,

you write across my heart
breathing life into my soul,
lifetime long, evanescent memory
as you live in me,
yet you will never fade!
at all before i find my way,

alas, once was something,
far more than today,
for alone i am nothing;
at best just a part,

to keep it all together;
you write across this heart,
for, love, life with you,
was a true work of art,

all before you found your way,
do remember i'm right behind,
for even knowing our souls are entwined

at times alone;
still i fly blind...

§* *§
*|*

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2005-02-02 02:22:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:45:24 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem, it was so written perfectly everything worked well. The music was just so soothing it's such an amazing work of art.

A great poem.

Jane x

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:53:45 AM AEST
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Well i didn't get the music to work but it's my putor cause i jus updated and I think i need to work on my sound cause after my last crash I had to start all over so I need to do some download.
Any way girlfriend this is a rematkable write.
one can feel all the emotions-n-hopes in this write.
Sorry i'm so far behind but i'll get there.
Hugs my friend,
emy

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:30:27 AM AEST
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very beautiful bittersweet write

Shari

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:47:17 AM AEST
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ahhh Ness......this is why we have missed you so here. Beautiful expressions wrapped in such emotions .
.......Ladyfawn poetry for sure.

Long overdue
Roses for my daisy
Larry

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:01:52 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful Nessa I have tears
Michelle

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:03:39 PM AEST
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pleasantly dreamy and loving.
Giving it up, everything, and getting it all back and more....

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:14:21 PM AEST
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the music..the poem..I am weeping..I think this is the best I've ever read from you..wish it was mine..I can't stop crying..it is just gorgeous..

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:08:35 PM AEST
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another beautiful write pixie, love your work, so honest yet gentle . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:31:36 PM AEST
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Absolutely, beautiful, very touching. You are an excellent, expressive writer. Thank you that touched my soul.
Theresa(lovesucks)

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:26:31 PM AEST
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"all before you found your way,
do remember i'm right behind,
for even knowing our souls are entwined

at times alone;
still i fly blind..."
Gorgeous way to end such a beautiful poem.

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:19:19 AM AEST
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Enchanting and beautiful.
I specially liked the first two lines- the way you began the poem- very true words.

Enjoyed reading this.

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:57:36 AM AEST
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Excelllent as always

michelle

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:05:54 PM AEST
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I get the feeling that you are writing about some you lost and are just waiting to go to him in eternity, for the love that you two shared trancends time, space, and even life and death, I just hope that he is in peace and that you will to when you go to meet him.

I loved this one it was very heart warming and at the same time tear jerking also the music it just made it all the better. I do hope that you pull through your loss, and if I am wrong I am sorry.keep writing God bless.

wolfman

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:20:45 PM AEST
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Beautiful, a work of art! I love the music, it's very soothing.

Scott

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:48:57 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful and the music is perfect. This captures my heart, excellent.

Take care,
Nancy

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:06:35 AM AEST
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Dearest Nessa...I love to read this fantastic write.. your emotions beautifully expressed..
really great:-) venkat

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:50:17 AM AEST
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Hi Nessa, your words truly reached me ... I always love to read your work even if I'm quiet of late ... beautifully written as always by a beautiful heart. ... Jan

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:43:34 AM AEST
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Beautiful. The music added to its beauty.

Love Sweetangelukxxxxx

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:09:46 AM AEST
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Nessa, while reading this poem my heart smiled and teared up all at the same time. It is absolutly beautiful.

~Me~

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:31:13 AM AEST
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wow this is so touching.
hang tuff, my friend.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:43:33 AM AEST
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I've probably said this before, but you have a wonderful talent.

johnny.

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:24:08 AM AEST
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Simply Gorgeous. This has to be one of the best poems I've read in a long while. Its written to perfection, it flows smoothly and is stunningly beautiful. An excellent write.

Hugs 'n Love
- Becca

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:09:38 PM AEST
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I'm impressed and delighted with this. It is excellent, and moving as well. The interspersed italic lines are a very nice touch.

Bravo!

Andrew

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:25:10 AM AEST
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An artist would have a hard time painting a picture of your heart,because it is so big,& the romanticly red shade would be so difficult to copy! He would have to paint a picture at least the size of Texas!! You're the true artist,not with pictures,but with words!!! As every poem sings to you the sweet sounds you never before ever heard!!!! Your poems are just unbelievable to the term of:poetry!!!!!
Each is a pleasure to read,& this one is as well !!!!!! Keep em' coming & our heart's ah humming!!!!!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!!!!

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:30:05 PM AEST
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WOW....this is just lovely!!!!!

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:14:57 AM AEST
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I agree with the heading of your poem. And that is also at the end of a bible parable which I will not quote. I think I am lucky to be able to read words such as these. In the midst of reading poetry by others I think about you and I come to see what is new in your pallette of wisdom and expirience. I never leave disapointed (hardly ever) This is a very uplifting poem.

Re: heart notes (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 04:56:58 PM AEST
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Incredible Nessa

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