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murder or suicide?
Contributed by
karmen
on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:19:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Theres a murder tonight,
or was it suicide?
There's cuts on her wrists,
there's blood on her body.
There was a killing tonight,
was it suicide or murder?
Her face is white as a ghost,
and her eyes are red,
like she was crying.
There was a suicide tonight,
because there is a note,
explaning why.
Telling of her hurt,
and to why her eyes are red.
There was a suicide tonight,
she said she did it,
because of her mistakes,
and her broken heart she has caused.
There was a accident tonight,
to a young girl, with a broken heart.
She now lays in blood,
you can see dry tears on her cheeks.
There was a death tonight,
this girl, no longer breatheing,
this child, no longer living,
this angel, now one for real.
Copyright ©
karmen
... [
2005-02-02 02:19:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: murder or suicide?
(User Rating: 1 ) by catz77 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:47:21 AM AEST (User
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i like this poem but it needs work.read it over a couple times. |
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Re: murder or suicide?
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:26:36 AM AEST (User
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hey, i gotta say this is great as is, course that's my thoughts.
To me it shows me the unique understading of the heart especially a broken heart.
I give u five big stars a masterpeice that will help others realize how saddening life is at times and after death she' a real angel. it also represents death burial, resurection.
huggs,
smiles,
emy |
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Re: murder or suicide?
(User Rating: 1 ) by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:40:49 AM AEST (User
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hey i like it it is very good sorry i cant say more but i g2g to school bye
DEMON |
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