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Array ( [sid] => 82575 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I hope You Understand [time] => 2005-02-01 23:45:48 [hometext] => Sometimes it feels good to write about things you would like to do but never would. And if you did would anyone really care? [bodytext] => I killed myself today
As I always would say
Just wanted you to know
So that it would show
How much I meant those things I said
I'd never tell a lie even when I'm dead

I hoped you'd understand
But you never listened beforehand
Now I hope you will care
If you get this letter in your stare
Now you know just how I felt
Full of hate when my final card was dealt

I just thought I'd write this last letter
So everyone will know that I never got any better
And that I never had any fear
Of dying with a reason so unclear

I hated them all as much as you
But I should have said how much I loved you
Or how much I cared too
Now I leave you with this at hand
I hope that that you can understand

[comments] => 7 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 36 [informant] => shamateur [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I hope You Understand

Contributed by shamateur on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:45:48 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I killed myself today
As I always would say
Just wanted you to know
So that it would show
How much I meant those things I said
I'd never tell a lie even when I'm dead

I hoped you'd understand
But you never listened beforehand
Now I hope you will care
If you get this letter in your stare
Now you know just how I felt
Full of hate when my final card was dealt

I just thought I'd write this last letter
So everyone will know that I never got any better
And that I never had any fear
Of dying with a reason so unclear

I hated them all as much as you
But I should have said how much I loved you
Or how much I cared too
Now I leave you with this at hand
I hope that that you can understand

Copyright © shamateur ... [ 2005-02-01 23:45:48]
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Re: I hope You Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:29:42 AM AEST
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There's a lot of emotion in this. Great write.

Re: I hope You Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:00:44 AM AEST
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I normlly wont read anything to do with suicide Im glad though that you wouldnt consider doing it. You captured a deep spot in some ppls thoughts in this write well done
Michelle

Re: I hope You Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:55:18 AM AEST
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wow, i too am glad u would never do it either but I can certainly relate to the thoughts in ones mind running a muck.
it's really hard to fight our own demons at times. it's really good to have friends to understand how we all struggle.
awesome, mucho wisdom.
huggs, undertanding,
emy

Re: I hope You Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:32:06 AM AEST
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I've been down this road many times. I'm evry impressed that you have the will power to fight off these thoughts. I seriously wish i could. Exllent write btw.

~Alucia~

Re: I hope You Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:07:03 AM AEST
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full of true emotions and
a great write

Re: I hope You Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by ArseCrust on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:47:53 PM AEST
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i think this is a very deep poem and it is really good

Re: I hope You Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:16:10 PM AEST
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You described exactly how I feel everyday. Amazing poem.

Keep your head up,
--Kara

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