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My beautiful Mother sleeps
I wish to wake her

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Forever slumber
Never to be awakened
Buried in the ground

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Father dies, child nine
Eighteen child looses Mother
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Three Haikus of Death

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:25:14 PM in AEST
Topic: Haiku

Cemeterys' cold
My beautiful Mother sleeps
I wish to wake her

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Forever slumber
Never to be awakened
Buried in the ground

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Father dies, child nine
Eighteen child looses Mother
Cancer took them both

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2005-02-01 23:25:14]
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Re: Three Haikus of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:28:44 PM AEST
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Oh man, these just all out rock! Nicly done!

Re: Three Haikus of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:27:47 AM AEST
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such beauty in so little said, such substance in a phrase, splendid peice of writting . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Three Haikus of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:35:52 AM AEST
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So sad, but that is life (or death). Short and sweet (bittersweet). Good writes.

Re: Three Haikus of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 11:15:05 AM AEST
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Hi my friend, I would like to comment on these poems, but to be honest, I don't have the slightest idea as to what Haiku Poetry is.

Maybe you could educate me?

Willofree, Terry

Re: Three Haikus of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:43:32 PM AEST
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well..I don't want to start anything..I was going to start my rant about haiku and nature again..but death is a part of nature..so.. you're ok kid LOL.. everyone gets ***** when I do that..but when I went to the haiku seminar they said haiku was supposed to deal with nature ...the first line should set out the season.. so I just say what I learned and try to be helpful.. I'm willing to learn toooooooooooooo..God.. Ever since the war..and the bomb though..geez...rotflmao..HiiiiiiiiiYaaaaaaa!!!!

Re: Three Haikus of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:38:27 AM AEST
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wow those are great haikus.

Re: Three Haikus of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:32:06 PM AEST
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Really sad, I am sorry that happened to you. These sound really great though. But I don't know much about haikus but they look nice.

Scott

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