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Failed Agression

Contributed by neveryours on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Don't tell me I'm crazy -
words hiss and sputter
wet spittle and ugly intention
Gather in mouth corners
with a little bit of cornbread left
From a lifeless supper

Don't you know who I am?
(don'tyouknowwhoIwishIwas)
Threatens to dismantle
This already precarious
balance of real
And make believe.

Skies shift and fog lifts
sweet smiles and apologies
Hands kissed and sobs for understanding
I'm tired, weak from loss and
DON"TYOUWALKAWAY

Idle threats from powerless fingers
crumbling words in limp attempts
to wield this nothing talent
Firing blank shots and
Cry because
Alone is all encompassing
And laughing at your
Failure.




Copyright © neveryours ... [ 2005-02-01 23:20:02]
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Re: Failed Agression (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:29:52 PM AEST
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I feel a lot of anger here, you sound like you have some issues. I wish you peace.


Re: Failed Agression (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:21:11 AM AEST
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or..bleeding inwardly and in pain.. waiting for just the right moment and the right excuse to slit her wrists....again


Re: Failed Agression (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 09:38:55 AM AEST
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I can relate very well.
This got to me.
There's a lot of pure feeling, real emotion in this write..
I can feel it.


Re: Failed Agression (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 03:57:28 AM AEST
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grand. encompassed by 'alone'. that's such a good term.




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