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Array ( [sid] => 82513 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To love once more [time] => 2005-02-01 17:00:02 [hometext] => My first love poem, please be gentle with the comments,lol. [bodytext] => Love is like oxygen, we need it to survive.
I have been dying for so long it’s a wonder I am still alive.
Like a fallen petal of a rose I falter,
Every time I see a happy couple saunter.
It isn’t jealousy, but sadness.
Stabbing at my chest like madness.

Until this very day, I felt this way.
But no more for I hear the shore,
Calling my name in the dead of night.
I get tingles in the pit of my stomach at the mere mention of your name.
Your smile makes me smile with so much delight.

No turning back now, I have come too far.
Don’t knock me back for it will leave a scar,
Too many have I on my wrist,
I don’t need another, for you to enlist.
Please accept me, for who I am,
I need you; to at least program.
I can’t sleep at night because I want you to care,
Tomorrow I will sit near you in the armchair.

Until then, I hope you know,
I love you more than I will show.
Although, our love will surely outgrow,
Silly walks on the shore.

When tomorrow comes my flower anew,
Fresh smelling petals that never grew.
I will always look at you,
Thinking softly if I whereto,
Call you over and show you how I feel.
Maybe one day I will, but for now I will dream,
Of us in our new flat and how we will survive that.
Old feelings lost, now revived,
I smile once more for I know now that I am alive.
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To love once more

Contributed by noone on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:00:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Love is like oxygen, we need it to survive.
I have been dying for so long it’s a wonder I am still alive.
Like a fallen petal of a rose I falter,
Every time I see a happy couple saunter.
It isn’t jealousy, but sadness.
Stabbing at my chest like madness.

Until this very day, I felt this way.
But no more for I hear the shore,
Calling my name in the dead of night.
I get tingles in the pit of my stomach at the mere mention of your name.
Your smile makes me smile with so much delight.

No turning back now, I have come too far.
Don’t knock me back for it will leave a scar,
Too many have I on my wrist,
I don’t need another, for you to enlist.
Please accept me, for who I am,
I need you; to at least program.
I can’t sleep at night because I want you to care,
Tomorrow I will sit near you in the armchair.

Until then, I hope you know,
I love you more than I will show.
Although, our love will surely outgrow,
Silly walks on the shore.

When tomorrow comes my flower anew,
Fresh smelling petals that never grew.
I will always look at you,
Thinking softly if I whereto,
Call you over and show you how I feel.
Maybe one day I will, but for now I will dream,
Of us in our new flat and how we will survive that.
Old feelings lost, now revived,
I smile once more for I know now that I am alive.




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Re: To love once more (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_carebear on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:10:20 PM AEST
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I like this poem it seems really sincere. It doesn't suck at all for a first poem, i think. Keep writing!! ~*Sam*~


Re: To love once more (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:24:40 PM AEST
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good job


Re: To love once more (User Rating: 1 )
by shadowed_soul on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:23:37 PM AEST
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Hi Kirsty,

Another good poem. Well written and comes from the heart. I can relate to your poem which makes it even better. Keep on writing

Shadowed_Soul


Re: To love once more (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:31:10 PM AEST
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wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: To love once more (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:55:41 PM AEST
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Beaultifuly written, straight from the heart, it's not about first or second, or third, 4 the taste of
love is different with every new experience, and ever new experience, is a first time . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: To love once more (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:20:47 PM AEST
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This is very good for being your first poem about love. I really like this. It's very well written.




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