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When I find that my life is through
For all of you who are my friend
I am sorry that I’m at my end
Because of you? Not at all
I was willing to take the fall.

Forgive me this my greatest sin
For it tells where I’ve been
I am sorry to leave you now
But to live with my self I don’t know how
I have no family I have no home
So now my soul well be free to roam
To view the life I could have had
And seeing it now it makes me sad

To late now for regrets
For I have made idle bets
My soul from this world departs
And my farewell to all I impart
“To everyone I hold dear
I am sorry that I could not stay here…

I will regret this in the end
He procrastinates
…Yes I will.

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Untitled

Contributed by wolfman on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:06:48 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I don’t know what I’ll do
When I find that my life is through
For all of you who are my friend
I am sorry that I’m at my end
Because of you? Not at all
I was willing to take the fall.

Forgive me this my greatest sin
For it tells where I’ve been
I am sorry to leave you now
But to live with my self I don’t know how
I have no family I have no home
So now my soul well be free to roam
To view the life I could have had
And seeing it now it makes me sad

To late now for regrets
For I have made idle bets
My soul from this world departs
And my farewell to all I impart
“To everyone I hold dear
I am sorry that I could not stay here…

I will regret this in the end
He procrastinates
…Yes I will.

Copyright Â© wolfman ... [ 2005-02-01 16:06:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:13:33 PM AEST
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flowing words touched with such sadness but glad to see that your still around dont ever feel your ever alone and you have nowhere to go your special and a wonderful poet let your soul shine through your words
Michelle

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 04:14:31 PM AEST
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Incredibly dark, definitely pulled some heart-strings, my friend... This one is a tear jerker. I know how this feels, no doubt that everyone has felt this way before.... The depth in your words are endless, wolfman... Absolutely flawless!

Thanks so much for sharing with us this magnificent piece of artwork... Melancholic, filled with anguish, and despair.. I hope you are passed this, my friend..for to dwell in such an obscure memory, is unbearable... Feel better! Much love and blessings! Forever,

Stephy *Fleur*

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:54:17 PM AEST
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what do you mean you have no family..you have us..and I hope we have you..and if you have no home..I can offer ours to share..we are hell to live with..and I'm on the edge of suicide every day..but ..c'est la vie..

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:23:37 PM AEST
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an excellent write... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 05:32:35 PM AEST
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A very good one, Josh. I guess we all have things to regret about the past (Except Jason, he's perfect). Well written.
Take care.
David
P.S. Don't you hate comments that try to summarize your poems?

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 03:24:37 PM AEST
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Very telling piece. I like the ending on this one. You Scribald these emotions well.

Andrew

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 04:09:03 PM AEST
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OK, as for a title to this...

Regretful Farewell?

My best suggestion.

Andrew
(something with farewell in it)

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