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I always feel useless
When every one is ruthless

But no one knows the brutal truth
That lies before my very feet

My dad thinks I’m always mad
When in fact im always sad...
Could I really be that bad

Afraid to show my feelings
When no one sees me bleeding

My life has been a lie
And now I want to die
So now I say goodbye
Before I hit the sky
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The Brutal Truth

Contributed by spazie on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:50:29 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

THE BRUTAL TRUTH

I always feel useless
When every one is ruthless

But no one knows the brutal truth
That lies before my very feet

My dad thinks I’m always mad
When in fact im always sad...
Could I really be that bad

Afraid to show my feelings
When no one sees me bleeding

My life has been a lie
And now I want to die
So now I say goodbye
Before I hit the sky

Copyright Â© spazie ... [ 2005-02-01 14:50:29]
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Re: The Brutal Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:15:54 PM AEST
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hey this is a pretty good poem it like how u use rhymes keep it up!
Kay-Kay

Re: The Brutal Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:29:22 PM AEST
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Well, anger is the emotion that is easiest to express, maybe if your suppressing what your feeling that is the reason for your anger, because you should not have to repress it... think about it i did, find out what is wrong, and make a move to change it, is someone hurts u let them know... even if they refuse to hear.....hurting yourself won't do u no good.... trust me....

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