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To him boys come first before his girlfriend

A man can say "Yeah that's my boy"
But to his girl is like "Yeah that's my toy"

A man expresses his feelings never
Until he can say "I LOVE YOU FOREVER"

A man can't be understood
Bet you anything his girl could

A man can hurt his girl by what he might say
To him he'll never change his way

A man gets mad at every little thing
Knowing to his girl sadness will bring

A man don't care if he's mean to his girl everyday
Knowing how much his girl loves him she'll put up with it and stay

But most of all a man won't realize something when it's gone
Because he'll be like "WHATEVER" and move on [comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 32 [informant] => strawberrygirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

A Man....

Contributed by strawberrygirl on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:24:29 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

A man acts tough around his friend
To him boys come first before his girlfriend

A man can say "Yeah that's my boy"
But to his girl is like "Yeah that's my toy"

A man expresses his feelings never
Until he can say "I LOVE YOU FOREVER"

A man can't be understood
Bet you anything his girl could

A man can hurt his girl by what he might say
To him he'll never change his way

A man gets mad at every little thing
Knowing to his girl sadness will bring

A man don't care if he's mean to his girl everyday
Knowing how much his girl loves him she'll put up with it and stay

But most of all a man won't realize something when it's gone
Because he'll be like "WHATEVER" and move on

Copyright © strawberrygirl ... [ 2005-02-01 14:24:29]
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Re: A Man.... (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:47:53 PM AEST
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A.ww... .amen. Exactly.

Re: A Man.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:23:28 PM AEST
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good write but thats not a man thats just a poor example!!if that so called man is that way its ur fault u even call him ur man all men are not like that

Re: A Man.... (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:42:07 PM AEST
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I think you are writing from the view of a child..You are finding guys is what the problem is..You describe a Man..This and all of what you wrote is not the true action of a Man..

Re: A Man.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:40:12 PM AEST
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a boy acts like that... a MAN faces his responsibilities and treats who he loves with the utmost respect. You have not found a man if you have such petty problems.

Re: A Man.... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:43:07 PM AEST
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it took courage 2 write that, and right or wrong you

are entitle 2 your opinon, some provacative words

on your part, i admire your bravato, a characteristic

thought 2 be indginieous only 2 men, my mistake . .

Dorian Chambers

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