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We dotted the I & crossed the tee,
But when half of me decides to come out,
It shakes you up & fills you with doubt.

For you my love I have done so much,
I have declined the sweet reapers touch,
I tried to stay far away from heartache or pain,
But I still find myself inside hurts terrain.

You love my Dr. Jekyll but hate Mr. Hyde,
When he comes out it’s as if you have died,
Two people trapped inside a damaged soul,
One without the other can never feel whole.

When one is trapped the other escapes,
The evilness of it inflicts multiple rapes,
Not just on the body but also on the mind,
The last thing it will do is perform something kind.

Love or compassion is to Mr. Hyde an unknown,
Only pure hatred is inside him full grown,
Anger & rage is what Mr. Hyde’s driven by,
He is the one that makes Dr. Jekyll want to die.

Love & hate opposite sides of the coin,
Only together can they both seem to join,
Apart they are lost, not together in this land,
Only do both personalities go together hand in hand.

I can not get rid of one without the other,
As to my good twin comes with an evil brother,
One who is fuelled by anger & booze,
One who does nothing but destroy & abuse.

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You Love Dr.Jekyll

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:36:56 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You loved me,
We dotted the I & crossed the tee,
But when half of me decides to come out,
It shakes you up & fills you with doubt.

For you my love I have done so much,
I have declined the sweet reapers touch,
I tried to stay far away from heartache or pain,
But I still find myself inside hurts terrain.

You love my Dr. Jekyll but hate Mr. Hyde,
When he comes out it’s as if you have died,
Two people trapped inside a damaged soul,
One without the other can never feel whole.

When one is trapped the other escapes,
The evilness of it inflicts multiple rapes,
Not just on the body but also on the mind,
The last thing it will do is perform something kind.

Love or compassion is to Mr. Hyde an unknown,
Only pure hatred is inside him full grown,
Anger & rage is what Mr. Hyde’s driven by,
He is the one that makes Dr. Jekyll want to die.

Love & hate opposite sides of the coin,
Only together can they both seem to join,
Apart they are lost, not together in this land,
Only do both personalities go together hand in hand.

I can not get rid of one without the other,
As to my good twin comes with an evil brother,
One who is fuelled by anger & booze,
One who does nothing but destroy & abuse.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-01 10:36:56]
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Re: You Love Dr.Jekyll (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:52:21 AM AEST
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Awesome write!! This was one of my favorite books back in elementary school. I loved this.

~Alucia~

Re: You Love Dr.Jekyll (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 11:55:56 AM AEST
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Good god This is amazing hun..A superb write definitly.

Re: You Love Dr.Jekyll (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:16:18 PM AEST
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Ohh that was very good, an interesting write on a classic story. Great write Kriss.

Jane x

Re: You Love Dr.Jekyll (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:46:59 PM AEST
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creative and clever and beautifully written, your title and note drew me right in:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: You Love Dr.Jekyll (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 05:54:24 PM AEST
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A sad but beautiful write pixie, your not alone in your perills, we r all of 2 sides, a touching poem
never the less, wish u well . . .

Dorian Chambers

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