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Array ( [sid] => 82402 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A hand [time] => 2005-01-31 23:19:56 [hometext] => willie,this is for u,i really need u right now,enjoy! [bodytext] => It's you
that can help me
It's you
that can see

I need you
now more then ever
it's true
we can be together

A hand
to help understand
I need your hand
to help me stand

A terrible thing
just happened to me
and now i only cry
and i can't deny

Please help me
get through this
Please help me
You are who i miss

I lay helpess trying not to think
its hard to even blink
It's hard to even see
So now i ask you to help me
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 24 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

A hand

Contributed by savedbydeath on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:19:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

It's you
that can help me
It's you
that can see

I need you
now more then ever
it's true
we can be together

A hand
to help understand
I need your hand
to help me stand

A terrible thing
just happened to me
and now i only cry
and i can't deny

Please help me
get through this
Please help me
You are who i miss

I lay helpess trying not to think
its hard to even blink
It's hard to even see
So now i ask you to help me

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2005-01-31 23:19:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A hand (User Rating: 1 )
by spazie on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:37:16 PM AEST
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it wasent bad but the lines were kinda dull but keep going and you got the skillz to make a masterpiece

well done
SPAZIE

Re: A hand (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST
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well it was great i loved it n spazzie what a spazzoid and to me it is a master piece keep em up love ya

WILLIE

Re: A hand (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:19:05 AM AEST
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Such a beautifull, awesome, heart felt plea for help.
I'm sure you'll get the hand u searched for.
Use to think i didn't need any body but it didn't take long to see different.
that hand will be in yours before u know it.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy

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