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Array ( [sid] => 8227 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Union Forever [time] => 2002-12-08 08:00:00 [hometext] => for one of my stories. self explanitory! [bodytext] => The bells ring to bring smiles upon their faces.
The sweet scent of their loving embraces.
Linked by arms,
You walk down with not insecurities or alarms.

But you can never see the truth behind the mask.
That may unravel at last.
You hope love is true.
You hope it to be down the row with two.

She cries at night.
Not knowing how to hide the fright.
That she doesn't think she loves you.
Things began to ponder and loosen too.

She's scared to hurt you.
Scared to hope that she'll be with you forever too.
Her friends are happy.
Life is all good and easy.

But things are happening.
The day is white and flowers will bring.
Linked forever by a bounding.
A single circle with no stop or ending.

A ring to place upon your finger.
Will she take this? Or will she linger?
Falling for another will not be good.
For her confusion is not understood.
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The Union Forever

Contributed by frozensuicide on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The bells ring to bring smiles upon their faces.
The sweet scent of their loving embraces.
Linked by arms,
You walk down with not insecurities or alarms.

But you can never see the truth behind the mask.
That may unravel at last.
You hope love is true.
You hope it to be down the row with two.

She cries at night.
Not knowing how to hide the fright.
That she doesn't think she loves you.
Things began to ponder and loosen too.

She's scared to hurt you.
Scared to hope that she'll be with you forever too.
Her friends are happy.
Life is all good and easy.

But things are happening.
The day is white and flowers will bring.
Linked forever by a bounding.
A single circle with no stop or ending.

A ring to place upon your finger.
Will she take this? Or will she linger?
Falling for another will not be good.
For her confusion is not understood.

Copyright © frozensuicide ... [ 2002-12-08 08:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Union Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:20:32 PM AEST
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Good write. Thank you for sharing it with me.
Regards,
Ramfire

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