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Array ( [sid] => 82264 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blizzard [time] => 2005-01-31 09:55:22 [hometext] => Not much to say really, just the struggle within. [bodytext] => A snow flake falls and an angel cries
A blizzard comes and that angel dies
The sun shines where the snow still lies
Maybe soon a demon will rise

Someday we'll find
What we've left behind
But for now
We can wonder how
We're gonna' be free from sin
And be holy again
Oh, I wonder when

A snow flake falls and a demon cries
A blizzard comes and that demon dies
The moon glows on the snow that still lies
Maybe soon an angel will rise

Someday we'll find
What we've left behind
But for now
We can wonder how
We're gonna' waller in sin
And be evil again
Oh, I wonder when [comments] => 2 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 61 [informant] => asrealthefallen10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Blizzard

Contributed by asrealthefallen10 on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:55:22 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

A snow flake falls and an angel cries
A blizzard comes and that angel dies
The sun shines where the snow still lies
Maybe soon a demon will rise

Someday we'll find
What we've left behind
But for now
We can wonder how
We're gonna' be free from sin
And be holy again
Oh, I wonder when

A snow flake falls and a demon cries
A blizzard comes and that demon dies
The moon glows on the snow that still lies
Maybe soon an angel will rise

Someday we'll find
What we've left behind
But for now
We can wonder how
We're gonna' waller in sin
And be evil again
Oh, I wonder when

Copyright © asrealthefallen10 ... [ 2005-01-31 09:55:22]
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Re: Blizzard (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:43:28 PM AEST
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'A snow flake falls and an angel cries
A blizzard comes and that angel dies'

i like the way you started thing one. i really like the line above, and the one with the demon too. nice form...well written...keep it up...

Auryn

Re: Blizzard (User Rating: 1 )
by nanonan on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 07:56:22 AM AEST
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I wonder if this is merely a poem, or a witnessed story conviniently written in this manner. It feels like when I read it, I'm not just reading it, I'm viewing it... And the turnaround... how it moved from

"A snow flake falls and an angel cries
A blizzard comes and that angel dies"

to

"A snow flake falls and a demon cries
A blizzard comes and that demon dies"

I really feel like you are writing the cycle of balance that is life. The eternal war between good and evil, but it isn't good and evil. But, a struggle for what one must do... The angel is the right choice, the demon is the wrong, and the blizzard is the eternal confict we all have to face one way or another... I like it...

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