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Array ( [sid] => 82239 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mine [time] => 2005-01-31 00:13:45 [hometext] => Haha, scary psycho poem inspired froma murder novel I read... Yeah... Boredom does crazy things to you... [bodytext] => I had many secrets
You promised not to tell

I had many regrets
That made me live a mortal hell

I had many ups
And I had many downs

But the one thing to keep me going
Was knowing you were around

Captious looks controlled my life
I was chained to a multitude of lies

What I saw in the mirror was a mistake
But you were there to open my eyes

I used your flesh to bury worries
I invaded your lips to share my sins

I used your blood to cover up
All my secrets held within

Your arms were always open
For a simple just in case

And it still pains me now
To remember that look upon your face

As I held your heart in my hands
And felt the cease of its steady beat

And all of our years of trust and love
In one moment seemed to cease

I want to love you like never before
I want you to be mine

I want to know you inside and out
Even if it means together this will be the last time

I want to feel your pain
I want to taste your tears

I want to dig into your soul
And keep your sin from all of these years

Your love was like a child's
Sweet, true, and pure

But my constant craving for you
I just can't seem to find the cure

You plague my thoughts
I can't get you out of my head

And I've found the only way I can love you
Is to love you when you're dead




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Mine

Contributed by AKA_Anonymous on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:13:45 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



I had many secrets
You promised not to tell

I had many regrets
That made me live a mortal hell

I had many ups
And I had many downs

But the one thing to keep me going
Was knowing you were around

Captious looks controlled my life
I was chained to a multitude of lies

What I saw in the mirror was a mistake
But you were there to open my eyes

I used your flesh to bury worries
I invaded your lips to share my sins

I used your blood to cover up
All my secrets held within

Your arms were always open
For a simple just in case

And it still pains me now
To remember that look upon your face

As I held your heart in my hands
And felt the cease of its steady beat

And all of our years of trust and love
In one moment seemed to cease

I want to love you like never before
I want you to be mine

I want to know you inside and out
Even if it means together this will be the last time

I want to feel your pain
I want to taste your tears

I want to dig into your soul
And keep your sin from all of these years

Your love was like a child's
Sweet, true, and pure

But my constant craving for you
I just can't seem to find the cure

You plague my thoughts
I can't get you out of my head

And I've found the only way I can love you
Is to love you when you're dead








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Re: Mine (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:18:01 AM AEST
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amazing write, very vivid imagery...w00t. I like this alot..very dark as well.


Re: Mine (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:25:23 AM AEST
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Such a beauty even if it came from a murder mystery. I can certainly relate in a way.
huggs,
emy




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