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Array ( [sid] => 82233 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Bullet In mY Head [time] => 2005-01-30 23:17:57 [hometext] => enjoy!not exactly a self struggling poem but its the only topic thats close to it,hope u's all like it [bodytext] => Kill me please
that knife is just a tease
i don't care
lifes not fare

i wanna die
i wanna rest forever
i dont wanna cry
cry anymore

A bullet in my head
would be the best
I'm always put to the test
and now i wanna be dead

Do us all a favour
and kill me
Strangle me
Do yourself a favour

I'll be taken to the devil
cuz i aint no angel
built up with thoughts of evil
should i be taken by the devil?

A bullet to my head
burry me in the abandoned shed
Let me lay dead
thats what i said
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A Bullet In mY Head

Contributed by savedbydeath on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:17:57 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Kill me please
that knife is just a tease
i don't care
lifes not fare

i wanna die
i wanna rest forever
i dont wanna cry
cry anymore

A bullet in my head
would be the best
I'm always put to the test
and now i wanna be dead

Do us all a favour
and kill me
Strangle me
Do yourself a favour

I'll be taken to the devil
cuz i aint no angel
built up with thoughts of evil
should i be taken by the devil?

A bullet to my head
burry me in the abandoned shed
Let me lay dead
thats what i said

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2005-01-30 23:17:57]
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Re: A Bullet In mY Head (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:25:26 PM AEST
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Very sad but i think we all feel this way one time or the other.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy

Re: A Bullet In mY Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:26:01 PM AEST
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good poem rodney.

Re: A Bullet In mY Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Whitelightning77 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:53:38 PM AEST
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a struggling write alright.

thanks for sharing

Re: A Bullet In mY Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:30:31 PM AEST
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Wow all this about came true and it sucks:-( great write loved it n love u more
Willie

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