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You only get one shot though, so don’t mess up and blow it
While you’re going around living life this way
Think what will happen on Judgment Day
You’ll be real sorry then; you’ll try to fix your mistakes
But by that time, it will be way too late
You had many years to change your ways, so there is no excuse
For when you stand before God and face the truth
You can’t lie your way out of this one, you can’t run away
Are you going to be in Heaven or Hell everyday
What’ll it be? It’s time to choose
Do you want to win or do you want to lose
Think about where you’ll be when your life is through
Just ask yourself now: What Would Jesus Do
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Life

Contributed by bigtig6269 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:36:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Life is shorter than you think it’ll be gone before you know it
You only get one shot though, so don’t mess up and blow it
While you’re going around living life this way
Think what will happen on Judgment Day
You’ll be real sorry then; you’ll try to fix your mistakes
But by that time, it will be way too late
You had many years to change your ways, so there is no excuse
For when you stand before God and face the truth
You can’t lie your way out of this one, you can’t run away
Are you going to be in Heaven or Hell everyday
What’ll it be? It’s time to choose
Do you want to win or do you want to lose
Think about where you’ll be when your life is through
Just ask yourself now: What Would Jesus Do

Copyright Â© bigtig6269 ... [ 2005-01-30 21:36:50]
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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by vanilla_flame on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:39:18 PM AEST
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that is really good, wow if this isnt one of your best, im gonna go check out your other works, :D

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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:46:42 PM AEST
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reminds me a bit of eminem in a weird way. rather hits close to my research paper topic of the apocalypse. the question should be, what should be done.

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by bigtig6269 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:59:09 PM AEST
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thanks for your posts. I don't think I could ever be placed in Eminem's category, but it is a nice thought. Thanks again.

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_4_eternity on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:59:45 PM AEST
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reminds me of eminem 2 lol, thats what i was thinking as i read it

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