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Senseless Murder

Contributed by blacksabbath026 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:49:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Restrained and beaten,
At the mercy of a maniac.
I awake
Engulfed in darkness,
In a room
Smelling of death
I can see nothing
Nothing but my thoughts

The horrid feeling
The one nobody can describe
The one you feel right before death
Is growing uncontrollably
As i try to break my bonds
Unsuccessfully i give up
My rage mixed with helplessness
Comes out in a series of screams

Out of nowhere,
I begin to hear the killer
Coming to end me
Who is this man?
Why am I hear to die?
The footsteps grow louder
As he approaches the door
And slowly opens it

He doesn't turn on the light
I lie here
Anticipating my death
As i begin to feel
His presence drawing nearer
Unknown emotions appear
Without hesitation
He swings a knife into my side


I am aware every second
Feeling every inch
That he rips
It even seems that
I can even feel the blood
As it showers out
I scream,
A scream filled with hate and pain

Mercifully, he finishes the opening
Not even bothering to remove the blade
He fills a wine glass with my blood
And sets it aside
Suddenly, light appears out of nowhere
I can see the killer, he is a complete stranger
Surprisingly, he is fat
His face burnt and deformed
The light, as quickly as it came
Suddenly goes back to darkness

The blood still gushing out of me,
My emotions all turn into horror
As i feel his tongue
Enter into my wound,
I can feel every lick
My screams intensify
As i hear and feel him
Desperately licking my inside

As he removes his head from my side
My relief is indescribable
But also short lived
As he finally removes the knife from my side
He seems to take pleasure from screams
As he starts to laugh
I know my end is near
I even wish to meet death

Finally, this man
Lowers the knife and stabs it
Into my neck,
Violently ripping it down into my chest
I start to taste the blood
As the darkness grows more intense
I can feel him frantically riping and forcing the knife
Through every space in my body

Finally, my agony ends
Death comes, his dark robe
Comforts me
He reaches his hand
To my mutilated corpse
And the he beckons to me
I feel all my energy come again as i rise
I follow death out of my tomb
We walk side by side
Into the afterlife




Copyright © blacksabbath026 ... [ 2005-01-30 15:49:42]
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Re: Senseless Murder (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:51:01 PM AEST
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This is the funniest poem i Have ever read..


Re: Senseless Murder (User Rating: 1 )
by jthzero on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:56:25 PM AEST
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It may not count for much but I thought it was good as the same way people like to watch horror movies, and etc.


Re: Senseless Murder (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:10:10 PM AEST
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First there's nuthing about this funny! I'd say the writer has written a masterpeice 'cause to write like this u had to have an out of body experience. No one in my opinion could ever write like this unless they've been there.
I commend u for this write as I jus watched the Martin L. Kings two movies cause I'm from the South and remember the riots that bought more freedom, actully I'm still on part two the movie. Not that I'm saying u r black, I'm jus thinking of the pain enduring for sensless murder ans how innocent people were killed for them to hold the heads up in dinaty. In my oppinion that was useless murder!
Any way, this write is sad but it's allso very powerfull too.
Luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, prayer, peace,
emy


Re: Senseless Murder (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:42:13 PM AEST
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Murderer? Murderer? Let me tell you a little something about murder. It's fun, it's easy, and much easier then you could know.
Anyone can get away with it.


Re: Senseless Murder (User Rating: 1 )
by marshmalloska on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:05:51 AM AEST
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beep beeeeeep!! weeeeeeee!!! honk honk!! chooooo choooooo!!!
lighten up people, i mean jeez awaken from your intellecual depression
NOW
beep beeeeep!!!
=)




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