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Am i alone?
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:43:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Mommy, Daddy,
there something in my room.
I see its shape moving,
while it contemplates my doom.
I try to hold my breath,
and not make any sound.
I squeeze my eyes shut,
praying not to be found.
If i don't breath in soon,
i feel my chest shall burst.
And what shall happen after that,
i'm beginning to fear the worst.
My lungs are on fire,
as my nose begins to itch.
And though i struggle to resist,
my eyes start to twitch.
With every minute,
my fear grows,
sticking into me,
like a thorny rose.
When i can no longer bear it,
can't take it anymore.
I jump out of bed,
my feet hit the floor.
I turn and look, into the dark,
and am shocked by what i see,
the only person in sight,
is a mirror reflection of me.
[...i am my own worst fear...]
Copyright ©
Quilted_rag_doll
... [
2005-01-30 15:43:05]
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Re: Am i alone?
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by noone on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:06:59 PM AEST
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Aww, i really liked this! A good write! Don't stop,
Kirsty xx |
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Re: Am i alone?
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:39:14 PM AEST
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| Sometimes lonliness brings on much more then you will know..Smart write. |
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Re: Am i alone?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 08:50:52 PM AEST
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| Good write. I like the twist at the end.. Great work. |
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