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Phantom
Contributed by
Phantomdream
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:57:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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You've pulled the mask away,
you've unveiled the master's face,
only to find,
there is no man,
beyond the mask,
no master of the dark.
Only shadow,
only pain,
death and blood.
Tears of anguish,
drownding roses,
swathed in black ribbon.
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-01-30 14:57:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Phantom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:04:09 PM AEST (User
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Hmm...nice imagery. May I suggest that you try describing something from your world? |
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Re: Phantom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sir_Odd87 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:13:50 PM AEST (User
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well written... I might suggest, however, that there is but one d in drowning... |
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Re: Phantom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:50:40 PM AEST (User
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Good write. I've been wanting to see that movie for the longest time now. |
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