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Just A Little While
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:35:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Here it’s Sunday again
Soon to bring those Mondays blues
Some just lie awake
Just itching to join that hassle and busy life.
Me, I feel a little sadness having to leave the safety of this small space.
Where the only goings on
Are in my writings .
And in my Dreams .
That carries me to a more enjoyable place.
It’s Never too Dark to see daylight
And Never to bright to hurt your eyes.
I can swim, walk, run and play
No thoughts of fear or dismay.
Many are there
Some with or with out faces
Surprises all
Just kicking back having fun .
I could stay forever but
That’s Not a part of living.
No one’s stay can be forever
Not in this place .
So I awake without a sound
Arise before the alarm goes off
And have my fresh coffee and bravely close the door.
And stand waiting for that Downtown train
Taking so many, just like me,
Back out into the real world
Wondering what will happen today and tomorrow.
Whisper.
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-01-30 14:35:31]
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Re: Just A Little While
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:06:34 PM AEST
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i love being home too, but when i have to go out its always interesting out there lol, great poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Just A Little While
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by Phantomdream on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:09:50 PM AEST
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| Great! I love it....one comment about editing....without is one word. Sorry 'bout that, it's just me. This expresses every author's feelings, i'm sure..... |
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Re: Just A Little While
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:10:03 AM AEST
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Great write!
I can understand what you're saying here...
well-expressed. |
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