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Picture Perfect
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:28:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Cover my eyes paint your
picture
tell me your truth,
fill my soul
move closer,reduce to a
whisper
Place me upon your canvas
pick your colors,do
as you will
brush my body with colors of
passion,
stroking my skin,
endless movements,
timeless caresses
Shades of kisses,colors
of lust
seizing the moment,colors
of the mind,passion filled,
your work of art
completing me with this,
your final touch.
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
... [
2005-01-30 14:28:21] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Picture Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:33:18 PM AEST (User
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Now see this one I like..No bad comment I know it will shock so many of my "fans" But ghis was good on many levals..Tender write.. |
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Re: Picture Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by bonita2689 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:34:10 PM AEST (User
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I like this poem, it has personality and the way you placed your words in the stanza gives the poem a lot of oomph too. Great job! |
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Re: Picture Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:51:40 PM AEST (User
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awww that was poetry perfect, a lovely write
pix xx |
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Re: Picture Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by subchild on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:34:08 PM AEST (User
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Sweet and so lovely.. |
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Re: Picture Perfect
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:56:12 PM AEST (User
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Young lady
You be proud of yourself.This ia a beautiful piece of art.
Write more and try different subjects.Show more of your talent.
Sinned |
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