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Array ( [sid] => 82136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Damn You [time] => 2005-01-30 11:21:35 [hometext] => please comment on this one. thanks for reading. [bodytext] => The burning of curses are upon me.
The reality of it all is what I cant become.
Hiding inside of what I could never seem to avoid.
My fingers are now numb,
I cant hold on any more.

Leave it alone!
Get away from my feet!
I will not go under,
Not like this, never this easy!

I may be a failure;
So stay clear of my life.
Times like these, its wiser to look to the left.

Leave it alone!
Get away from my feet!
I will not go under,
Not like this, never this easy!

I said this once before.
Why do you insist on doing this?
Does it bring you fun,
Or some uncanny bliss?

What is it with you?
Constantly when everyone is around...
Every time I seem to rise,
You keep pulling me down.
DAMN!

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Damn You

Contributed by ROUGE on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:21:35 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The burning of curses are upon me.
The reality of it all is what I cant become.
Hiding inside of what I could never seem to avoid.
My fingers are now numb,
I cant hold on any more.

Leave it alone!
Get away from my feet!
I will not go under,
Not like this, never this easy!

I may be a failure;
So stay clear of my life.
Times like these, its wiser to look to the left.

Leave it alone!
Get away from my feet!
I will not go under,
Not like this, never this easy!

I said this once before.
Why do you insist on doing this?
Does it bring you fun,
Or some uncanny bliss?

What is it with you?
Constantly when everyone is around...
Every time I seem to rise,
You keep pulling me down.
DAMN!

Copyright © ROUGE ... [ 2005-01-30 11:21:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Damn You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:24:46 AM AEST
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Well, be who you are anyway is all I can say. This was heartfelt and ticked off. Who knows why people do the things they do? There are no simple black and white answers. It's a good write. Blessings.

Re: Damn You (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:30:56 AM AEST
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Youch. You can definatly feel the anger behind this. Timebot gave some good advice though, just be who you are.
Other wise, great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Damn You (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:31:57 AM AEST
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I kept wondering..what is it with her feet..then at the end I got it..(nobody said I was smart..duh) but great poem..it kept me all the way through..I don't vote any more..if you read me..you'll see why..I'd easily give this 5 stars.

Re: Damn You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:01:39 PM AEST
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a very good expressive write,good writing

pixie xx

Re: Damn You (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:14:04 PM AEST
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great write, but sad!Believe in youself!!
=Jen=

Re: Damn You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:36:56 PM AEST
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your emotions were expressed well throughout this write its strong and powerful. All the above advice rings true just be yourself and up their boodies if that doesnt work give em a pop that will teach them! (Joke)
Michelle

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