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To see some friends I knew.

I had already been drinking,

But I only had a few.

I told my friends I’m leaving,

They called my wife to pick me up.

I drank some more Jack Daniels,

And a chaser from a cup.

Then I felt pretty sleepy,

So I hurried to the car.

I took off pretty easy,

Seemed like driving wasn’t hard.

I dozed for just a second,

When I woke to my surprise.

I was in a accident,

I couldn’t believe my eyes.

I wasn’t feeling anything,

Seemed like pain had no meaning.

But my shoulder was pulled out of joint,

And I had internal bleeding.

I walked to the other car,

I found out it was my wife.

She was coming to pick me up,

And now I took her life.

Then I was arrested,

They gave me fourty years to life.

For driving under the influence,

And the killing of my wife.

So before you drink and drive,

The party your at is more fun.

Then transforming your car,

Into a loaded gun.

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To Drink and Drive

Contributed by data2delete on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:16:27 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I went to a party,

To see some friends I knew.

I had already been drinking,

But I only had a few.

I told my friends I’m leaving,

They called my wife to pick me up.

I drank some more Jack Daniels,

And a chaser from a cup.

Then I felt pretty sleepy,

So I hurried to the car.

I took off pretty easy,

Seemed like driving wasn’t hard.

I dozed for just a second,

When I woke to my surprise.

I was in a accident,

I couldn’t believe my eyes.

I wasn’t feeling anything,

Seemed like pain had no meaning.

But my shoulder was pulled out of joint,

And I had internal bleeding.

I walked to the other car,

I found out it was my wife.

She was coming to pick me up,

And now I took her life.

Then I was arrested,

They gave me fourty years to life.

For driving under the influence,

And the killing of my wife.

So before you drink and drive,

The party your at is more fun.

Then transforming your car,

Into a loaded gun.

Charles Robert Montonya

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Re: To Drink and Drive (User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:40:20 PM AEST
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thats so well written
im so anti driving drunk or getting in cars with drunk people as thats happened to too many people i know and love, thanks for sharing - good work

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