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Array ( [sid] => 82099 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drive [time] => 2005-01-30 03:36:13 [hometext] => Don't drink & drive - This is not from experience, but it can make you see that drinking & driving does not mix [bodytext] => Sally went to sleep
Sally heard a knock on the door at three am
Her mum fell to the ground & bursted into tears
"My baby" Sallys mum yelled

Two hours before.......

The group of teenagers
Young & drunk
Steped into that 1975 Holden to drive
Drunk & furious
The group of 5 started to speed
FASTER & FASTER & FASTER

Sallys sister never woke again
Sallys sister died two hours before
the other 4 got away & survived

Sallys mum was told that the car flipped
Sallys sister was not wearing a seatbelt
Sallys sister was driving & was drunk

The mistake of a teenager
The mistake that hurt
The mistake that can't be forgiven
Was when she lost her life. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 31 [informant] => mia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Drive

Contributed by mia on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:36:13 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Sally went to sleep
Sally heard a knock on the door at three am
Her mum fell to the ground & bursted into tears
"My baby" Sallys mum yelled

Two hours before.......

The group of teenagers
Young & drunk
Steped into that 1975 Holden to drive
Drunk & furious
The group of 5 started to speed
FASTER & FASTER & FASTER

Sallys sister never woke again
Sallys sister died two hours before
the other 4 got away & survived

Sallys mum was told that the car flipped
Sallys sister was not wearing a seatbelt
Sallys sister was driving & was drunk

The mistake of a teenager
The mistake that hurt
The mistake that can't be forgiven
Was when she lost her life.

Copyright © mia ... [ 2005-01-30 03:36:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Drive (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 12:56:49 AM AEST
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Nice write. You had good intentions by writing this poem. Get this out to as many of your friends as u can. The more who hear this the better. Great write.

Re: Drive (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 03:17:06 PM AEST
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this is great...maybe not the best poetic write...but you still get your point across and that's all that matters.

i love it

- Beth -

Re: Drive (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:09:43 PM AEST
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Um...it's different. You sorta put a message into a poem but it works! Good write and good topic.
-Drapes

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