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[sid] => 82058
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Broken, Tattered, and Torn
[time] => 2005-01-29 22:32:16
[hometext] => still can't write about anything else...she's all I can think about. PLEASE COMMENT, thanks
[bodytext] => I didn't think it would be this hard,
each day it hurts more and more.
My heart is now permanently scarred,
its been broken and thrown to the floor.
I picked it up but it's beyond repair,
it'll never be the same.
No one in this world could ever compare,
no one could rekindle this flame.
A piece of my heart is gone for good,
it will never again be whole.
If I could fix it I would,
but the pain has reached my soul.
I will never forget this love I've known,
it'll be with me always.
It really hurts to be all alone,
but I know the future brings brighter days.
[comments] => 6
[counter] => 190
[topic] => 22
[informant] => CurtisC
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 8
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
)
Broken, Tattered, and Torn
Contributed by
CurtisC
on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:32:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I didn't think it would be this hard,
each day it hurts more and more.
My heart is now permanently scarred,
its been broken and thrown to the floor.
I picked it up but it's beyond repair,
it'll never be the same.
No one in this world could ever compare,
no one could rekindle this flame.
A piece of my heart is gone for good,
it will never again be whole.
If I could fix it I would,
but the pain has reached my soul.
I will never forget this love I've known,
it'll be with me always.
It really hurts to be all alone,
but I know the future brings brighter days.
Copyright ©
CurtisC
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2005-01-29 22:32:16]
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Re: Broken, Tattered, and Torn
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by greeneyes on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:43:01 PM AEST
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A sad write, I wish I could say time heals all, but I know thats not true, at least not right now. You may feel alone but your not. Sometimes its good if you would have someone to talk to.
Nancy |
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Re: Broken, Tattered, and Torn
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:12:58 PM AEST
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AWESOME poem I think most people can
relate to the rejection you depicted in this
poem. I liked this poem a lot because of the
last line you know that this pain won't last
forever and that I believe is the first step to
healing. You will get over this girl and be able
to move on. Keep up the writing buddy!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Broken, Tattered, and Torn
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:50:10 AM AEST
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| Time doesnt always fix things... Not for me at least... most the time it just builds on it... Not to kill your spirit or N E thing But just personal expiriance... Great write |
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Re: Broken, Tattered, and Torn
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:19:50 AM AEST
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| I agree with foreveralone and greeneyes only b/c I'm hurting now too, and time doesn't seem to be my friend. But I know things will get better for me and the same for u, as well as everyone else who's in a similar situation! Awesome right again! I know expressing my feelings in my poems always kinda like helped with the healing process. Good Luck! **hugs** ~Tanya~ |
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Re: Broken, Tattered, and Torn
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:49:17 AM AEST
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You wrote an excellent piece here. And I know it's so hard to move one after you've been shattered and at your lowest point, but it's true that everything happens for a reason. I'm a bit of a believer that time heals all wounds, so I think you just need to grieve all you can and get it all out. And when you're ready to move on you'll know it, and you'll come out with a better understanding of life from this terrible experience you've had.
I'm always here if you ever need to talk. :-) |
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Re: Broken, Tattered, and Torn
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:25:51 AM AEST
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very sad but i can relate to it in a big way. I thought that i would get over another didn't want to get over him. let's just say keep the faith cause ole Forrest Gump said, " My momma says life's like a box of chocolet's you never know what u gonna get."
U may think you'll never have a mended heart but I jus met someone that gives me more hope by jus being my mentor and friend. this person proved to me what true luv is. 'cause see i was lost and in pain with a broken heart that I had given up on healing myself.
a masterpeice.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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