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Array ( [sid] => 82014 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hating Life [time] => 2005-01-29 16:22:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => YOU HATE YOUR LIFE
I hate mine too
YOU THINK YOU'RE UGLY
I think I am too
YOU FEEL UNLOVED
I feel that too
YOU WANT TO BE HAPPY
So do I
YOU HOLD BACK EVERYTHING, CAN'T SEEM TO CRY
Sometimes I cry, sometimes I hold back, you have to give it everything you have
YOU THINK THERE IS NOTHING SPECIAL ABOUT YOU
But you're wrong
IT FEELS LIKE YOU'RE IN A BAD DREAM
There is no escape
I AM STUCK IN THIS MESS
For eternity
THERE IS NO HOPE FOR ME
I think that is untrue
YOU WANT ME TO BE MYSELF
That is all you have to do
THEN I WILL BE ME AND YOU WILL BE YOU
Together we can do it
NO WONDER HOW PEOPLE EVER GET ALONG
All we have to do is stay strong


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 43 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Hating Life

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 04:22:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



YOU HATE YOUR LIFE
I hate mine too
YOU THINK YOU'RE UGLY
I think I am too
YOU FEEL UNLOVED
I feel that too
YOU WANT TO BE HAPPY
So do I
YOU HOLD BACK EVERYTHING, CAN'T SEEM TO CRY
Sometimes I cry, sometimes I hold back, you have to give it everything you have
YOU THINK THERE IS NOTHING SPECIAL ABOUT YOU
But you're wrong
IT FEELS LIKE YOU'RE IN A BAD DREAM
There is no escape
I AM STUCK IN THIS MESS
For eternity
THERE IS NO HOPE FOR ME
I think that is untrue
YOU WANT ME TO BE MYSELF
That is all you have to do
THEN I WILL BE ME AND YOU WILL BE YOU
Together we can do it
NO WONDER HOW PEOPLE EVER GET ALONG
All we have to do is stay strong






Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-01-29 16:22:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Hating Life (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:44:43 PM AEST
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Great write! u know i use to feel that way to!
=Jen=


Re: Hating Life (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:37:09 AM AEST
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Amy, i can feel your anger in each line. It's very efective i liked it.

Jane x




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