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Array ( [sid] => 81970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FOOL [time] => 2005-01-29 08:38:29 [hometext] => Enrique Luis Garcia-Frias... This poem is dedicated to you....... This is what I feel while you are miles away...... [bodytext] => Droplets of warmth fall into the cold
Love slowly blends with sadness
Raging tears, I cannot cease…

To my knees, I weakly fall
But I hold my own hand
And think it was you holding me…

I stand, still faint and bitter
and seal my eyes, with partial light
Illuminating my sight

I envision you standing inches from me
Unclothed and just gazing at me
Not shivering despite the shower’s coldness

Both arms, I stretch to feel your face
Downwards, I move my hands from your neck to chest
Upward to your shoulders, downward to your arms

I feel through your thick hair and mess it up
I look at your face, and hear a silent laugh
Not really hearing anything…

I turn my back from such a wonderful vision of you
I kiss the air, yet it doesn’t kiss me back
I embrace the atmosphere, yet it doesn’t embrace me in return…

Alas! Reality is not fantasy’s fool
Wishing it would be, it just couldn’t be
Hold me, kiss me, and embrace me from the miles…
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FOOL

Contributed by Ada on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 08:38:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Droplets of warmth fall into the cold
Love slowly blends with sadness
Raging tears, I cannot cease…

To my knees, I weakly fall
But I hold my own hand
And think it was you holding me…

I stand, still faint and bitter
and seal my eyes, with partial light
Illuminating my sight

I envision you standing inches from me
Unclothed and just gazing at me
Not shivering despite the shower’s coldness

Both arms, I stretch to feel your face
Downwards, I move my hands from your neck to chest
Upward to your shoulders, downward to your arms

I feel through your thick hair and mess it up
I look at your face, and hear a silent laugh
Not really hearing anything…

I turn my back from such a wonderful vision of you
I kiss the air, yet it doesn’t kiss me back
I embrace the atmosphere, yet it doesn’t embrace me in return…

Alas! Reality is not fantasy’s fool
Wishing it would be, it just couldn’t be
Hold me, kiss me, and embrace me from the miles…




Copyright © Ada ... [ 2005-01-29 08:38:29]
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Re: FOOL (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:32:55 PM AEST
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"Reality is not fantasy’s fool". Great stuff. Keep it up :-)




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