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Array ( [sid] => 81964 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let Me Go [time] => 2005-01-29 04:48:11 [hometext] => Tell me what you think. It's about my parents. [bodytext] => Suffocate me.
Crowd me with your over-bearing,
Muffle my breathing with your constant ignorance,
Don't you dare ever accept me for who I am.

Cage me.
Tuck me into my bed of chains,
Keep me away from all that I enjoy,
Watch me rot in the presence of the source of my depression.

Frighten me.
Give me a fear to disobey,
Install a never-ending worry,
Cause me to look over my shoulder everwhere I go.

Love me.
Explain to be that it's because you care,
Lie to me that you have good reasons,
Protect me from a world built from your pessimism.

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Let Me Go

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 04:48:11 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Suffocate me.
Crowd me with your over-bearing,
Muffle my breathing with your constant ignorance,
Don't you dare ever accept me for who I am.

Cage me.
Tuck me into my bed of chains,
Keep me away from all that I enjoy,
Watch me rot in the presence of the source of my depression.

Frighten me.
Give me a fear to disobey,
Install a never-ending worry,
Cause me to look over my shoulder everwhere I go.

Love me.
Explain to be that it's because you care,
Lie to me that you have good reasons,
Protect me from a world built from your pessimism.

Copyright © Jane_Doe ... [ 2005-01-29 04:48:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let Me Go (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:38:31 AM AEST
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Wow what a sad poem, you have writen this so well.
Im sure a lot of the members here can relate to this beautiful write of yours.
Thanks for posting and i hope to read more of your works soon.

Jane x

Re: Let Me Go (User Rating: 1 )
by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:45:07 AM AEST
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A very powerful emotional poem, well done. Im sorry to hear that your parents are like this to you but if it's any reassurance I live with my grandparents and by me reading this poem it made me think of how they treat me like this too.

They always make me inferior to what I am at times and tell me very hurtful things so I know how it feels.

If you ever need to talk message me on here. Hope to hear some more poetry from you soon. Take care........

Lots of love

xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx

Re: Let Me Go (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:41:38 AM AEST
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Very emotional, easy to relate to poem.

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