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Array ( [sid] => 81886 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => shattered [time] => 2005-01-28 17:29:53 [hometext] => my heart strings were played, and you played them off-key... so i threw your broken soul into the sea. [bodytext] => my love was in shatters,
askew on the floor.

i hear rain as it patters...
on my windows and door.

my heart strings were played,
and you played them off-key.

so i threw your broken soul into the sea.

just stare at your picture and try to look back,
and i don't know how... but we went far off track.

it was all so perfect, and crystal and blue.
the gentle caresses sent only from you.

but then it got rainy, the sky got so dark,
and somewhere inside me you blew out the spark.

i couldn't believe it but it was so true,
i lost my best friend the day i lost you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bruised_hands08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

shattered

Contributed by bruised_hands08 on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:29:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

my love was in shatters,
askew on the floor.

i hear rain as it patters...
on my windows and door.

my heart strings were played,
and you played them off-key.

so i threw your broken soul into the sea.

just stare at your picture and try to look back,
and i don't know how... but we went far off track.

it was all so perfect, and crystal and blue.
the gentle caresses sent only from you.

but then it got rainy, the sky got so dark,
and somewhere inside me you blew out the spark.

i couldn't believe it but it was so true,
i lost my best friend the day i lost you.

Copyright © bruised_hands08 ... [ 2005-01-28 17:29:53]
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Re: shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:57:04 PM AEST
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this is beautiful... great job!

Re: shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by Livingfaith143 on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:01:12 PM AEST
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Oh my goodness this is such a touching poem. You did a great job with the words you chose to express your emotion. I love it.

Re: shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:17:15 PM AEST
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a wonderful poem with very clearly expressed emotions

Re: shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:01:10 PM AEST
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Ooo, hit home with me hun... Im feeling this way so much right now.. great write

Re: shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:34:44 PM AEST
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I agree 200% with wat Livingfaith143 said! Awesome job! TD

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