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Array ( [sid] => 81851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Opened Door [time] => 2005-01-28 11:46:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => For a man that was empty and with out feeling,

You were an angel sent from far above,

I thought I was done learning about the heart,

You taught me that I could still love,

In a death lock of total apathy,

I've persevered though my strife,

The lonely shadow of my existence,

with no emotion was not a real life.

Day by day I fell further from light,

You opened my Pandora's box which contained,

All the pain and pent up anguish,

That at some point I learned to refrain.

With all of these emotions all out at once,

I felt like a hurricane and a forest fire out of control,

Out of my dreary non-existent coma i was pulled,

At once my life was great and a hellhole.

You opened up the door to love and pain,

This great new door you brought, I went through,

But, the hurricane is over the forest fire has burned out,

Quietly listen, life continues, Jenn, thank you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 24 [informant] => syloss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

The Opened Door

Contributed by syloss on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:46:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

For a man that was empty and with out feeling,

You were an angel sent from far above,

I thought I was done learning about the heart,

You taught me that I could still love,

In a death lock of total apathy,

I've persevered though my strife,

The lonely shadow of my existence,

with no emotion was not a real life.

Day by day I fell further from light,

You opened my Pandora's box which contained,

All the pain and pent up anguish,

That at some point I learned to refrain.

With all of these emotions all out at once,

I felt like a hurricane and a forest fire out of control,

Out of my dreary non-existent coma i was pulled,

At once my life was great and a hellhole.

You opened up the door to love and pain,

This great new door you brought, I went through,

But, the hurricane is over the forest fire has burned out,

Quietly listen, life continues, Jenn, thank you.

Copyright © syloss ... [ 2005-01-28 11:46:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Opened Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:57:34 AM AEST
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very sad and lovely.

Re: The Opened Door (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:32:51 PM AEST
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I ..don't know what to say..

Re: The Opened Door (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:45:41 PM AEST
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This is lovely, so very sweet.
I guess there is someone for everyoone, always someone who saves us in some way or another.

Very loving write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: The Opened Door (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:56:48 PM AEST
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Awwww......TD

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