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Array ( [sid] => 81839 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Darkness [time] => 2005-01-28 09:44:29 [hometext] => I thinks this is missing something, so any comments would be very much appreciated =) [bodytext] => And as you walk away
draw the darkness around you
like a cloak

Let it be your armour against
the spears of hate
they throw at your back

Let it be your protection against
the sting of the laughter
that echoes in their wake

Let is be the mask that stops
the tears of acid that threaten to
spill from you eyes
from falling onto your face
and burning a hole in your heart [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 32 [informant] => marshmalloska [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Darkness

Contributed by marshmalloska on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:44:29 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

And as you walk away
draw the darkness around you
like a cloak

Let it be your armour against
the spears of hate
they throw at your back

Let it be your protection against
the sting of the laughter
that echoes in their wake

Let is be the mask that stops
the tears of acid that threaten to
spill from you eyes
from falling onto your face
and burning a hole in your heart

Copyright © marshmalloska ... [ 2005-01-28 09:44:29]
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Re: Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:48:23 AM AEST
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You're missing an "r" in the third from the last line, but that's all. This is an excellent write.
Stitch

Re: Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:41:34 AM AEST
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It is good besides that one letter..I would have liked it a bit more tragic or dark but that is simply my taste..It was worded well and had great feel to it..

Re: Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:32:23 PM AEST
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beautiful, lovely style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa

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