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Array ( [sid] => 81838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => mistake + Breakup [time] => 2005-01-28 09:10:59 [hometext] => I must make it ridiculously clear that this is not my work, but the work of an old net friend, allison johnson i have since lost touch with, that i think deserves recognition. [bodytext] => Breakup
he changed his mind
she giggled and laughed
smiled real wide
and threw up her hands
if thats what you want
she replied with a smirk
tossed her hair
slipped off her ring
turned on the spot
and walked out with a grin
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Mistakes
she closes her eyes
but hears it all
wishes she was anywhere but here
the salty sting subsides
little rivers flow from her eyes
welled up in the crevace
a happy smile had once resided
choking on tears
her pain caught up with her
hands to eyes
trying to block it all out
replaying scenes in her minds eye
regretting every whisper, every touch, every love-induced grin
so in a desperate attempt to escape this haunted world
she sobs herself to sleep
with aspirin to heal her heart [comments] => 3 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 43 [informant] => marshmalloska [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
mistake + Breakup

Contributed by marshmalloska on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:10:59 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Breakup
he changed his mind
she giggled and laughed
smiled real wide
and threw up her hands
if thats what you want
she replied with a smirk
tossed her hair
slipped off her ring
turned on the spot
and walked out with a grin
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Mistakes
she closes her eyes
but hears it all
wishes she was anywhere but here
the salty sting subsides
little rivers flow from her eyes
welled up in the crevace
a happy smile had once resided
choking on tears
her pain caught up with her
hands to eyes
trying to block it all out
replaying scenes in her minds eye
regretting every whisper, every touch, every love-induced grin
so in a desperate attempt to escape this haunted world
she sobs herself to sleep
with aspirin to heal her heart




Copyright © marshmalloska ... [ 2005-01-28 09:10:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: mistake + Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:40:23 AM AEST
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good. it is a beautiful and heart touching poem


Re: mistake + Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by Raven on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:21:30 AM AEST
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i really like it! if you ever talk with her again tell her they are really good!


Re: mistake + Breakup (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:12:27 PM AEST
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great poem




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