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Array ( [sid] => 8183 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => too late for love [time] => 2002-12-07 10:30:00 [hometext] => (when the one true love you gave up on finally appears) [bodytext] => The knowing smile,
the touch of your skin,
I smile at the way
your eyes welcome sin.
Wisdom, touch, wonder lust.
A beauty unseen outshines the sun,
the mind can fly where no men run.
Eyes of darkness
open each night
to watch my loneliness,
study my plight.
Planets, moon, soft stardust.
A prize so distant can’t be won.
A love affair better never begun.
A heart ensnared,
trapped by a vow.
Too late for love
to save me now.
Prison, stone, iron bar rust.
I wish I’d known you were the one,
but some mistakes can’t be undone
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 2 [informant] => darkeyedman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

too late for love

Contributed by darkeyedman on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The knowing smile,
the touch of your skin,
I smile at the way
your eyes welcome sin.
Wisdom, touch, wonder lust.
A beauty unseen outshines the sun,
the mind can fly where no men run.
Eyes of darkness
open each night
to watch my loneliness,
study my plight.
Planets, moon, soft stardust.
A prize so distant can’t be won.
A love affair better never begun.
A heart ensnared,
trapped by a vow.
Too late for love
to save me now.
Prison, stone, iron bar rust.
I wish I’d known you were the one,
but some mistakes can’t be undone

Copyright Â© darkeyedman ... [ 2002-12-07 10:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: too late for love (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:21:52 AM AEST
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ooOOoo! I really liked your rhyme pattern! (a/b/a/b/c/d/d) I found it quite interresting...and it worked really well with your poem. The flow of the poem was great and I found it to be a real pleasure to read!

I also liked the story...You definately had a way with words!!
*applaud*

Yvonne

Re: too late for love (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:46:12 AM AEST
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Beautiful masterpiece here.....i love the lines you wrote....I smile at the way your eyes welcome sin.....that's breathtaking....you've created a beautiful piece here..and it's so true some mistakes can't be undone....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it tremendously...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: too late for love (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 01:03:45 AM AEST
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Wow. This was chilly stuff for me to read for more reasons than one.

I also agree with springchic and liked your different rhyme pattern.

Re: too late for love (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 02:57:42 PM AEST
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I love this! I was searching for something that said what I needed it to, of course I couldn't find anything, but this came the closest. This is what happened to me... read soulseeker. This is beautiful

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