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We'd argue and i'd say i hate you
But we both knew that was never true
Because whenever i had a problem your the one i'd run to
That's why hating you is the last thing i wanted to do
Now i can honestly say i do and it's all because of you

I've always been told a sister's bond will last forever
I used to believe that because we were always together
You stuck by my side time after time
But eventually you went your way and i went mine

I was so excited when the phone rang and it was you on the other end
Then my heart sank i just couldn't comprehend
Your words weren't filled with joy they were bitter and cold
The words pouring from your mouth made my stomache fold
Each time you spoke it sent an ice cold chill down my spine
I just couldn't believe you'd take his word over mine

In the harshest way you swore revenge
Every last word that came out made me cringe
After the long battle to fight away the tears
I realized seeing my sister again was now one of my biggest fears

Don't you understand the pain you've just put me through?
Your my sister, my blood, i'd do anything for you
Why couldn't you believe me when i said it wasn't true?
Now there is nothing you can say or do
This goes beyond anger, i will never forgive you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SimplyMe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

His word or mine?

Contributed by SimplyMe on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:50:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Growing up as kids there was a lot we went through
We'd argue and i'd say i hate you
But we both knew that was never true
Because whenever i had a problem your the one i'd run to
That's why hating you is the last thing i wanted to do
Now i can honestly say i do and it's all because of you

I've always been told a sister's bond will last forever
I used to believe that because we were always together
You stuck by my side time after time
But eventually you went your way and i went mine

I was so excited when the phone rang and it was you on the other end
Then my heart sank i just couldn't comprehend
Your words weren't filled with joy they were bitter and cold
The words pouring from your mouth made my stomache fold
Each time you spoke it sent an ice cold chill down my spine
I just couldn't believe you'd take his word over mine

In the harshest way you swore revenge
Every last word that came out made me cringe
After the long battle to fight away the tears
I realized seeing my sister again was now one of my biggest fears

Don't you understand the pain you've just put me through?
Your my sister, my blood, i'd do anything for you
Why couldn't you believe me when i said it wasn't true?
Now there is nothing you can say or do
This goes beyond anger, i will never forgive you

Copyright © SimplyMe ... [ 2005-01-27 21:50:04]
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Re: His word or mine? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:43:35 PM AEST
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forgive, but never forget...

Re: His word or mine? (User Rating: 1 )
by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:43:29 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL. its very well written and very powerful..i hope things work wiht your sister remebr there's always room in your heart to forgive.

Re: His word or mine? (User Rating: 1 )
by Candy_Dirtbag on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:15:03 PM AEST
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I think I can say more for this poem, because I have a sister whom I hate, too. We're always fighting about the stupidest *****, and she gets on my nerves to no end. I can totally understand what you're going through. But, again, I can't say I know *exactly* how you feel. I will never forgive my sister either, acuZ we used to be so close also. Then things changed between us. *Hugs, and much love.*

Jessica.

Re: His word or mine? (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:38:07 AM AEST
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wow powerful indeed
but maybe you should just talk to her and hear her side b4 completely shutting her
out

Re: His word or mine? (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 09:13:02 AM AEST
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Wow How I can relate to these words. It is my cousin whom I have these same feelings for. It was also over the telephone words of hate sprang from her lips. She refuses to see the evil in this man. Finance means more to her than her own blood.
I wrote a poem sleeping with the devil, it has so many related feelings.
Our differences can never be healed I pray yours can be.

Excellent poem

Love Angelxxx

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