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Lose everything

Rage more
Nothing to take
Anymore
But everything to hate
Forever more

Feed the hunger
That burns
For loss of innocence
Unfilled for longer
Till there's nothing to discern
With lack of sense

Lie for truth
Because it wasn't enough
And lose yourself in darkness
With light unable to get through
Lose yourself in love

Rage more
Without what you want
Feed your hunger
To poison yourself
Lie for truth
Or cover it up

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Rage More

Contributed by essentially9 on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:39:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Rage More

Lose everything

Rage more
Nothing to take
Anymore
But everything to hate
Forever more

Feed the hunger
That burns
For loss of innocence
Unfilled for longer
Till there's nothing to discern
With lack of sense

Lie for truth
Because it wasn't enough
And lose yourself in darkness
With light unable to get through
Lose yourself in love

Rage more
Without what you want
Feed your hunger
To poison yourself
Lie for truth
Or cover it up

Just lose yourself

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-27 21:39:17]
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Re: Rage More (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:44:14 PM AEST
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another great write. you just lose yourself when you write, dont you. ;)

Re: Rage More (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:44:57 PM AEST
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My God you are amazing..Every aspect of this I loved..There is the best and then there is You.

Re: Rage More (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:20:20 PM AEST
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Great poem. I hope things get better for you.

Spazzo

Re: Rage More (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:28:07 AM AEST
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Well *my* hunger has nothing to do with rage. :-) Still, this is really imaginatively expressed. Keep writing! Cheers!

Re: Rage More (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:48:55 AM AEST
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hey. that's my line. :P

it's awesome. struck all my angry and hurting chords.

rage more

Re: Rage More (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:06:30 AM AEST
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wow, there is a power behind these words, a frustration and loathing.
well expressed.

Re: Rage More (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:35:10 AM AEST
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Hmm it reminds of something but i dont know what.
It's a great poem i like the anger and rage you were saying in here.
Cool poem.

Jane x

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