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Array ( [sid] => 81801 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Make My Spirit Soar [time] => 2005-01-27 21:27:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am lying here, kind of lonesome and blue
And I think, I think about you

Oh, how you stir me! You stir my very soul!
Suddenly I am a wild stallion standing on a rocky knoll!

I see just below me on a far hillside
A beautiful creature so graceful and showing such pride

Her mane is the color of the sunset; it is blowing in the wind
Oh, how I could look at her! I could look at her till no end!

Suddenly my spirit is driven like an eagle in the sky
I spread my wings and I begin to fly

My spirit soars, it soars into space
For a fleeting moment, I can see you lovely face!

I’m in your arms, your soft breasts against my beating heart
Then all of a sudden, I realize we are hundreds of miles apart!

I fold my wings and down I begin to soar
Down, down to the earth I had left just moments before

I am back on the hillside, oh, such haste
I look again but I can’t see your lovely face

I view the hillside but the creature is not there
And I wonder was that beautiful creature you or just a mare?

Your smile, your sweet voice, oh, how they beckon me!
Was it just a dream or was it love that is yet to be?

I have a life of sensuous passion to share
With such desire only the reckless would dare.

I ask God’s blessing on our love both day and night,
Till the end of life, until we see the heavenly sight.

You are far away in Kentucky with a heart full of love
Quiet, I say! Do I hear the cooing of a dove? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ArtisticGentleman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
You Make My Spirit Soar

Contributed by ArtisticGentleman on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:27:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I am lying here, kind of lonesome and blue
And I think, I think about you

Oh, how you stir me! You stir my very soul!
Suddenly I am a wild stallion standing on a rocky knoll!

I see just below me on a far hillside
A beautiful creature so graceful and showing such pride

Her mane is the color of the sunset; it is blowing in the wind
Oh, how I could look at her! I could look at her till no end!

Suddenly my spirit is driven like an eagle in the sky
I spread my wings and I begin to fly

My spirit soars, it soars into space
For a fleeting moment, I can see you lovely face!

I’m in your arms, your soft breasts against my beating heart
Then all of a sudden, I realize we are hundreds of miles apart!

I fold my wings and down I begin to soar
Down, down to the earth I had left just moments before

I am back on the hillside, oh, such haste
I look again but I can’t see your lovely face

I view the hillside but the creature is not there
And I wonder was that beautiful creature you or just a mare?

Your smile, your sweet voice, oh, how they beckon me!
Was it just a dream or was it love that is yet to be?

I have a life of sensuous passion to share
With such desire only the reckless would dare.

I ask God’s blessing on our love both day and night,
Till the end of life, until we see the heavenly sight.

You are far away in Kentucky with a heart full of love
Quiet, I say! Do I hear the cooing of a dove?




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Re: You Make My Spirit Soar (User Rating: 1 )
by Raven on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:12:54 PM AEST
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nice i loved it. Especially like the reference to Kentucky at the end.


Re: You Make My Spirit Soar (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:31:17 AM AEST
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This was very sweet. Good luck with your dream. Cheers!


Re: You Make My Spirit Soar (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:56:57 PM AEST
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Well done...loved this... the rhyme scheme is good..
Jenni




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